Reviews for A Marked Man
P.T. Tucker chapter 3 . 6/17/2018
This was great! Snape is super in character here and I love how he's constantly terrified and nervous but doesn't let himself show it. It makes sense for a person who's only twenty that's in way over his head with teaching and spying and so on. I love that he learns how to observe from his students, especially the line about Malfoy thinking he's developed the sight. XD A great fic all around and I wish there'd been more about McGonagall's reaction to all this, but it is what it is.
Kawisdom chapter 3 . 6/15/2018
Unfair! You had a fairly serious and interesting story going. Then Snape drank the veritaserum. I hate to tell you, but his honest answers were FUNNY. At least he knows he isn't good for a child's self image:). Enjoyable and promising, so it's a shame you never continued. Still, I did like wrote, so thanks.
scgaraycochea chapter 3 . 3/6/2017
Is a shame you didn't finish this story, I love it and I would like to see how it ends.
Your are great as a writer.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2/2016
omg love your dumbledore! this is awesome! :)
Machaon's Apprentice chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
An interesting story so far !
Quacked Lurker chapter 3 . 3/5/2016
"You Shall Not Pass!"

Sorry, but with those last two lines, I had the sudden image of newly hired Potions Professor Severus Snape being Gandalf the Grey.
It was funny to me.

I am enjoying your portrayal of Dumbledore - and your take on how Severus became the youngest Potions Professor in Hogwarts History.
Very nice characterizations of the Headmaster, McGonagall, and Snape.
Believable interactions, and lovable dialogue.

This chapter, the Vertiserum interview, gives me new understanding as to WHY Snape was never chosen to be Harry Potter's guardian.
Plus, Professor Snape's internal monologue/his thought process on 'what kind of stupid question is that?' is an entertaining look into Severus' snark and the open-endness of vague questions.
BlackFrost4 chapter 3 . 10/2/2015
keep posting. I really liked it
GuidingHand chapter 3 . 3/28/2015
All three chapters were good, but the best part was the veritus serum interview and the last line made me giggle. "You see? Perfectly harmless?"
Alibi Nonsense chapter 3 . 7/24/2014
XD I really love the last sentence. Oh lol. 'Hopeless idiots. They should all fail potions.'
Guest chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
Very good. This was an intelligent, funny read. It did end at an odd point, but i still loved it.
Amar 2 chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
Very good story, very good writer. I just wonder if the story is complete. If not, a pity you dont continue it.
Terahlyanwe chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Perfectly harmless. :p


Love this. :D
elestre chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
That ending was FANTASTIC! Actually those whole fanfiction is fantastic; it's amazing! I really enjoyed reading this!
Thank you 3
Guest chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
and why in seven worlds you have stoped here
Bonnie Gaynor chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
Great story, I like it very much. Will it go on some time or was that the end?
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