|Reviews for Children of the Present|
| thunderstudent chapter 6 . 10/28/2013
Great chapter, things are finally picking up, also Leomon and Digivolve into GrapLeomon or IceLeomon. I would suggest GrapLeomon should be your choice since IceLeomon is mostly a blue recolor of Leomon. I can't wait to see the Digidestened help the Tamers. If I remember correctly Agumon should still be able to Warp Digivolve into WarGreymon, assuming he still has Azulongmon's power. Keep it up, I want to see what happens next.
| OMNISENSE95 chapter 6 . 10/28/2013
You know what would be awesome? If you made it possible for Jeri and Leormon to Biomerge to Mega level.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 6 . 10/27/2013
Awesome! Time to get an upgrade! Cycloleomon here we come! Please update soon!
| kitsunelover300 chapter 5 . 10/23/2013
Well this is a rather interesting story. I've never seen something like this before, not counting "Digimon United" by NYCDman.
I love the way you combined the Digital worlds and gave explanations on how the 4 sovereigns fit into each sector. It'll be exciting to see how everyone bonds with one another and works together. I never felt that one digidestined group was weaker than the other. Yes, Kari and the 01 and 02 gang can't do what the others can do but they represent every virtue that exists within all the digital worlds and their mere existences protect the digital world.
I have a few ideas for this story if you'd like to hear them.
1. The crests empower some of the other Digidestined or get matched up with the others. Like Courage- Takuya, Marcus and Takato. Friendship- Kouji, Rika and Thomas. Love- Zoe. Sincerity- Yoshi. Knowledge- JP. Hope- Henry. Light- Suzie and Kindess- Kouichi. Maybe Davis, Cody and Yolei can get their own, Davis having the crest of Miracles.
2. The other Originals digivolving their digimon to mega and Silphymon and Shakkoumon reaching their mega forms. I was always a little put off that Sora and the others never got the shot to make their digimon reach their final stages.
Oh, and if Gatomon has her tail ring then she will be able to become Ophanimon. The only reason she became Magnadramon instead was because she lacked her tail ring.
3. If we do have some character development or dissections, why not have one for Gatomon? She was Myotismon's soldier since she was a Salamon and had to go through some pretty harsh abuse to, not only digivolve to Champion on her own and stay in that form, but to forget who she was for a long time. Digimon are pretty durable so the fact that Gatomon has a scar on her paw says a lot about what she went through.
I know it's a kids show, but I would have loved if their dove more into Gatomon's character and make her change gradual instead of immediate. I know she is the Digimon of light but one never does get over something like that without some behavioral ticks. She even said she had nightmares of Myotismon still.
Maybe you can portray her ruthless side once in this story, show her skills as a soldier and all.
Please let me know what you think and I hope you update soon!
| thunderstudent chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
So far, so good. I can't wait until the fighting starts. Hopefully the season 1 Digidestened will somehow regain the power to Digivolve their Digimon to the Ultimate and Mega levels. Or perhapes that power isn't truly gone, just depleted. Anyway I can't wait to see the next chapter. :)
| TheCrazyAnimeFan chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
I'm really excited to see how this will turn out. I like how you made all the explaining in a nutshell but still made it understandable and made it easier to get on track with your story. I also think that the Original digidestines can still help out by moving around more freely to do other important things while their digimon is in battle. Anyways keep up the good work and update soon.
| OMNISENSE95 chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
You know something, I like the direction you're taking the story in... if only I knew what that direction was. Oh, well.
| Pandora the Ghost Elf chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
This is a really nice chapter. It got all the raw and in character emotions in it it. That bit about Marcus and his parents felt right. And when reflecting on the Tamer's world I feel like you made it very realistic and true.
Keep up the good work; can't wait for the next chapter! 8D
| edboy4926 chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
Oh wow, this is really good:) Please update soon!
| Pandora the Ghost Elf chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
OMGOMGOMG! I AM TOTALLY FANGIRLING OGER HERE! XD
Everyone is in perfect character! It's a major crossover! And funny to boot! The idea is orinial from what I can tell and I'm super psyched when I read yhis fic! X3
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
| edboy4926 chapter 4 . 9/11/2013
Keep on going.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
| Ya-dont-know-who chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
I really, really, really, really, really like how this story is coming along AND that you included the Data squad! ThoughIstillhavenotseenityet, but they are rare here...
Don't worry about your slow pace, that means you're doing great!, more stiff to read and that will make many readers very happy :3
So thank for the chapter!
| TheCrazyAnimeFan chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
Whoo! Finally the recognizement of the groups. Though this is kinda a lot to take in right now I'm just worried on how they will interact with each other. I know that they'll fight each other (cause of their differences, especially the Warriors) but I hope they'll come into an understanding. Anyways keep up the fantastic work cause this story as been good so far so please continue to update soon! :D