Reviews for A Dirty Little Gift
Idk chapter 2 . 1/7
This was very interesting.
Ghost Humper 55 chapter 2 . 10/24/2016
Oh! You did have clones! Never mind, 5/5 (lol)
Ghosthumper55 chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
While I appreciate the prose and your use of diction was solid, I can't help but feel that the story escalates too quickly an lacks a real sense of pacing or tension. I also feel that you could have done more with the premise, Danny could have used his plasma beams to smack Sam's butt, used his stretchy disjointed abilities on his dick, made copies of himself, Etc.

Overall, I'd have to give this a 2/5, great effort, but your energy was just not in the right place
Everyone's-Little-Nightmare chapter 2 . 7/23/2015
i loved this! It reminds me of my actual life. I deal with this all the time and is glad to see it being written in a way that shows truth to this lifestyle... Thank You for this story
Pizza chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
You made my cock so hard.
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
lol
Steven chapter 2 . 5/13/2014
You do this in Danny's point of view like him in first person
JadeKurosaki chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Shiva: /
Dominique: O/O
Me: Hehe. Excellently written. Very hot. Loved it.
badkitty5237 chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
I THOUGHT THAT WAS LOVELY both danny and sam are naughty , naughty people
InkMeYouVillian chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
Just now read the second chapter, and I do hope you'll write more in the future. Not only was the plot good, but you have a well-rounded and mature writing style. Phenomenal is how I would describe this.
TheAngelofIego chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
That was- Um... Cold? Hot? Sexy? I don't know. How 'bout all three?
earlschibiangel chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Very hot. I am loving this story! So hot and bothered at the end of this!
sammansonrepilica chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Yayyy i love that it was so freaky and awesome
DannySamLover20 chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Wow... Impressive! Keep going!
jtdarkman chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
lol oh yea BEST BIRTHDAY EVER LOL
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