Reviews for The Kiss that Changed Everything wandb
tbens chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
i love ur style of writing and content but am left with a few puzzling ?'s .. why did edward dismiss her when he first met her; knowing how it must look why didnt edward explain about all the women earlier .. imagine if it had been bella with many many men - surely he noticed her staring and her demeanour must've been down/flat .. his behaviour puzzles me to the point that it makes me angry .. surely jas knew about edwards father and i cant believe meddling alice wouldnt have asked about edward for bella seeing how down she was
archy12 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
This must be the happiest story in this contest! :)
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Good one.
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I really hope you will continue this. I enjoyed reading this.
2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
nothing like some lemons in the afternoon...well done
Maplestyle chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This is why people should communicate! She could have saved herself a lot of heartache.
bluevolvic chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Aww! so she got her man in the end! what a sweet story :)
Karriek chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Nice touch to mix a bit of humour in. Good luck with the contest.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
that was a really cool lemon. i liked your word choices. thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
alisapay1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This was a good one and it could be continued a little if you,so desired! Thanks for writing and good luck in the contest... Mwah!
MsHavisham79 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
omg, I can't believe she drunkenly told him that! lol, nice humor moment to end on.
Jane3105 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Good story
roxiegirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Sweet! Just my kind of story. Angst with an HEA! Win!

bakergirl24 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Very cute and I think I know who this is. It will be interesting to see if I'm right. ;)

Thanks for sharing. Take care and peace. T.
Mylisssa chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Ahh, so many misunderstandings. I could see how they would both be confused about the other. I'm glad they talked it out and had some laughs in the end.
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