|Reviews for Lapse|
| Layla chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
I love your fic. It's beautifully written with great emotions.
Thank you for sharing it.
| JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Well now that was very good ..
| mizanna chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Love love love!
| talimom1997 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
Sigh. Big smile here. I imagine them a hairsbreath from falling into a committed relationship.
Thank you for creating a picture of it happening.
| grabyourgear chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
| plaincrazysuckup chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
this is half how I want them together, and it was a perfect oneshot considering. I loved it!
| Com2meZT chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Love this very much
| Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Sophie love this :P even without the dialogue she provided, lol.
But thank you :D and this is lovely!
Favourite sentence: "Nothing. I... I like this, that's all."
I don't even know why, just that the honesty is a pleasant surprise. This is brave Ziva, and I love it!
| AWorldOfNonsense chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
LOVED this story! In a time when it's hard to read Tiva, this one-shot eased the pain. Thanks for writing! :)
| ncisloverinnc chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Ahhh...I really needed this (since my dreams of it happening in canon have been shattered :p ). Lovely piece.
| luzma chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
how beautiful must pass this in the actual show .. it would be unfair to not let us see something like this .. this couple is really unique ... to follow .. hopefully reach an agreement ...you story..very well .. thanks for sharing
| born30 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I liked this: short, sweet, and satisfying. Thanks for writing it! :)
| Schmaltzy chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
So lovely, and so welcomed tonight.
| NCIStiva3 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I loved this very much! I think you did a great job!
| trixie111 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I really love it :) Sweet, cute and beautiful:)