|Reviews for A New Day Has Come|
| richardrobinsonjr chapter 1 . 2/2
Pretty good, I enjoyed seeing Harry tell the truth!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
| Kingdom Hearts KeyBlade chapter 1 . 1/4
good job Harrison!
| This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Nice one off
| RavenLilyLuna chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
| ak chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
des parents qui renie leur enfants; ça doit être rare dans le monde magique! sauf les blacks bien sur!
| Cinniomon chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Nice one-shot, are you gonna write any more WBWL?
| H chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I like it please please please add another chapter (or 10).
| DarkkEagle chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
| GinaKim chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I like WBWL stories. Even if this is only a one-shot, I was extremely satisfied with your story. So many have written WBWL stories but only a few were ever completed and the ending was not very satisfying because the angst was so long and the triumph so short. Good job.
| Katconan chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Great story with an interesting idea. Is Harry a Horcrux? Please state where he has been receiving his magical education as I gather he is not at Hogwarts and said his father, Nelson, has been doing a great job so that means Nelson is a wizard?
| Nocte Furorem chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Not bad for a second effort.
Noticed a few errors, but the BIGGEST was the date of October 31, 2001. Everyone knows the significance of the 31st of October in Harry Potter's world, but the year that Voldemort attacked the Potters was 1981 not 2001.
| the stargate time traveller chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
its brilliant. Its amazing how Harry can be mature but Lily, James, and Sirius were not. They were just petulant, and that snake thing.
Please can you write a sequel?
| The Endless Hourglass chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Wow. That's all I can really say. I know that this is a one-shot, but I wouldn't mind reading it if it wasn't. There's so much emotion, and it explains so much. . .It's one of the best WBWL stories I've ever read. Harry's personality and thoughts during the whole thing. . .I really enjoyed it. You didn't make him overly powerful or overly angry. You made him force people to see what had happened, and in a realistic way. And I especially enjoy James's and Lily's reaction to it all, because most of the time they are way too OOC for me to read.
I do have some pointers thought. :)
This is a pet peeve of mine, so let me just pick out an example so I can explain it right:
"Daddy," Harry said. "Could you get me another blanket it gets cold in my room in the middle of the night?"
That last part wasn't really part of the question, right? So, I just do this:
"Daddy," Harry said. "Could you get me another blanket? It gets cold in my room in the middle of the night."
It's a small fix, but it makes everything sound so much better. :)
You had many run-on sentences as well. Don't be afraid to proof-read your story and cut the sentences short for emphasis. It makes it even more emotional (which is almost impossible in this fic ;))
But as I said before, I really liked this. Usually, if there are no reviews to the story, I skip right over it (because I'm weird like that). However, I was intrigued by this one-shot. Like, REALLY intriged. I don't read a lot of fanfiction - I prefer writing - but I know I didn't waste my time reading like this.
This. One-shot. Is. Awesome. )
- The Endless Hourglass, may time be with you.