Reviews for Breaking Point
BustNjust9 chapter 4 . 3/20
Interesting story worth continuing
myulander chapter 4 . 1/9
nice & cool
shunshun chapter 4 . 11/20/2014
*Cries* this is too precious
I gotta say that this is one of the naruto fanfictions with great plot!
I honestly like the idea of an indifferent naruto better than a naruto out for revenge.
I'm looking forward for the progress of the story!
huhu, i hope Naruto will find someone who will treasure him as family/friend
HapHaxion chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
Why does every good story seem to end with a lack of updates?! WHYYYYYYYY :(
myulander chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
nice
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
Please update! :D
grimmich chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
so can he use the shadow clones or not? I mean he needs a technique to show everyone else and he needs more than just chakra chains, it is pathetic that he is 15 and that is the only thing he knows, in cannon by this time he already had quite the arsenal, hell when SASUKE was 12 he had more of an arsenal that what you are giving Naruto at 15... seems kinda like a waist to make them so old but still so useless...
acetwolf94 chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
Nice! I like it! Add more!
Matsukaze Tenma chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon
Hygieia chapter 4 . 2/13/2014
Good stuff.
ex-ellent chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Haki ... the hell? What does a skill from OP do in the Narutoverse? Because all three Haki-skills can be explained with skills from the Narutoverse ...
iFrostAir chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
This is a great story. hope you update soon. But one thing that confuses me is the skill list at the end of chapter 2. whats haki?
ex-ellent chapter 4 . 1/11/2014
Maybe, just maybe this will be different too all the other storys ..
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Why did you change the ages? That was pointless.

Haki is interesting.

You spelt 'knight' instead of 'night'.

Even if you had given Naruto the 'Shadow Clone' jutsu he could still learn other Jutsu's. Unless Naruto is going to show people he can use the 'Chakra Chains' he only has Henge and Kawarimi at the moment. That is even worse than canon plus he is like 15 now. Should have kept the same age as in canon. I see no real reason to change such a small detail.

Nice chapter.
Narutoenthusiast chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
A really nice story so far. I wonder though about Naruto's sudden ability to see glimpse of the future and change it. What is that about? Nice story once more, keep it coming.
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