|Reviews for I'll Show You Mine|
| SilverLionness chapter 1 . 10/18
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/15
But of course they'll have to keep practicing-an experiment is no good unless you can replicate it...
Again and again and again...
| Gemini Sister chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
A very hot and steamy companion piece that had me fanning my face as well as squirming with pleasure. Like Snape and Hermione I am well satisfied.
Thanks for writing and sharing. xx
| AdelaideArcher chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Whew. Right. That was hot! I loved it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Oh good grief, this was an amazing story until it fell for that trite old boring abusive sex troll. If he gets to hit her ass, when does she get to hit his? Hot wax torture? You need to read better books. When he flipped her over, did the lighted candle land on the bed and set the covers aflame?
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Awesome story. This one, and the one that started it before this one. Bravo! Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
That was terribly fucked up
| lisacakes16 chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
well that was super hot!
| Writtenaspr chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
How you write.
Fanfiction is almost breaking Laws.
But Aphrodite is smiling at you, Pan and honest nature are as blissful as we readers are.
| Ms. Anthrop chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Very, very, well done. Love the dynamics and the passion. The perfect PWP if there ever was one.
| Annie chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
Very sexy! But...a lot of mistakes and they really take you out of the story. A beta would really help!
| snapify52 chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
Yay! Thanks for the sequel! Muy caliente.
One type-o: "type of type" instead of "type of thing?"
| Nancy chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
Wonderful story. Keep up the good work.
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
interesting sequel :)
| narutonarutolove chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Aww, the ending was so sweet. )