Reviews for Dawn
indie-writes-stuff chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
This was perfect. Like absolute perfection. I mean it. You are a brilliant writer:)
InkedBaby chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Love when theyre at Remuss hoyse for some reason!
Quill Scribblings chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
I can't breathe!

Okay I'm fine now.

That was fabulous! I love it to bits and pieces and I love you for writing this. They're just such BOYS, admitting their feelings in a slightly tipsy way and it's bloody perfect :D

You have got their characterisation down to a T.
EchoDeltaNine chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Oh my goodness, this was so precious. I love it so much! I've been reading a bunch of Wolfstar stuff this week, and I've had a hard time reading a lot of the ones with "confessions" in them because they make it cheesy and unrealistic, but this was perfect. Just two friends admitting to each other their feelings, and feeling embarrassed and awkward, but altogether in love with the other at the end of it. So sweet. I'ma have to check out your other stuff :) Great job with this!
amama123 chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
This is amazing :) I really really liked it.
Moonpetal Lily chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 cute! I love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
That was absolutely lovely. I thought you handled the way they shared their feelings in a way that was sweet but realistic.I hope you write some more stories with this ship. :)
gobalbucs chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Awww! This was so cute! I like nervous Sirius! :D This was also a little innocent in a way, when they got together. XP

Good job! :D
happyday girl chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Awww this was so cute! I really loved it, I think you got their personalities just right :) one thing though, I noticed you used both American and English words quite a lot, for example saying farenheit, but then used an english swear word ( knobhead) im not sure if you use that word in america but I haven't noticed it in other stories :) back to the story though, I was smiling all the way through it at the end, it was really nice how they handled their feelings for each other, I really liked your sirius and how you wrote him. All in all this was a really great story, are you perhaps planning a sequel to it? I hope you do

Thank you!