Reviews for Fated Tale
MickeyMauser chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Heart Warming!
NaLuforever48 chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
They knew that they would be together from the beginning. That's sweet
KhaalidaNyx chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
That was a cool writing style. Time skipped around to the important parts (thankfully), and still told the full story.
Nalulover13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
PRETTY PLEASE MAKE MORE! Please?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Feedback: omg omg omg omg
Comments: I enjoyed how you depicted their lives being from two polar opposite worlds whilst them being oh so similar at the same time
Criticism: you strayed slightly from the main story, because they 1) exchanged names at the restaurant 2) Bora was selling them as models
Thoughts: to add a little more tug of the heart strings you should add the famous 'come with me' line
All in all good work
Tawny chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Awesome! Totally and utterly awesome!