|Reviews for Actualization|
| sassyfriend chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
I love this
| Beawolf's Pen chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
I can never get over the relationship between these two. It is just so perfect. They really would do anything for each other.
| SpaceGirl13 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I loved Pike...he was the best! So sad for poor Jim. Nice reflections on their relationship.
| nomdeplumekansas chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Beautiful story. I especially loved the line: "There is no single moment when the world is easy to bear, but, perhaps, with the aid of others, it is tolerable." So thought provoking and resonating. Please keep up the great writing.
| Meew3 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Well written. That reminds me I do have a suggestion/prompt/idea maybe one about Kirk's first two failures on the Kobashi Maru*? Because i've often wondered what he did to fail because I'm pretty sure he would've still would've fought till the end in that simulation. Anywas just an idea.
| Arete the Philhellene chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Wow. Just wow. Pike really was the mentor that Jim needed. So sad he died :(
"Be an Atlas." My favourite piece of advice ever. You're a wonderful writer with a feel for the characters I've not seen much elsewhere.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
great little story. very well written.