Reviews for Wayward Sons |
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![]() ![]() I love both this story and The Catalyst! I really enjoy the way you write the characters but my favorite is Legolas' and Thranduil's relationship. I know this hasn't been updated for about a year, but I hold on to hope that it updates soon! Thank you for heart-warming stories! |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! Pretty pleeeeaaaasssseeeeee?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK - I'll start by saying how interesting this story is. Its reached out and grabbed me not w one fist but two... That being said, its filled misspellings and repeated words. Do you not have a beta or at least spell check? When will you update w the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story! Please update. Please please please please please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh, please hurry! This story is beautiful! You've done a really, really good job! And so good at typing, I've only encountered the barest minimum of one per chapter spelling/punctuation errors, it's amazing! Thank you, -Wolfsong |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like this story. Like how you get a younger Legolas. It just get me to think he is younger because most of us have some hard times between childhood and being a grown up. |
![]() ![]() Would you please post another chapter? I understand that sometimes life get in the way, but I really want to read more. It is a fantastic story, great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was amazing! I just finished the first story and checked your profile, hoping there was a sequel! I really hope you intend to finish the next part lol Will be looking forward to your updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed reading these stories and would really like to read the rest of this story. I hope you keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elen sila lummenen omentielvo! (Sorry for the poor spelling) Over the past 2 days I have all of your stories, and LOVED them! I love the way you have portrayed Thranduil, Elrond, and the twins. Your writing style is very enjoyable and flows nicely. You are a true story teller mellon nim! Le hannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stumbled upon your other story - the Catalyst, and absolutely loved that one. I hoped there would be a sequel to that story, and here it is. Absolutely loved this one as well. It even had me in slight tears one a few occasions (when Legolas ran away from lord Elrond, and when Elrohir didn't regonize him at first). So sad for little Legolas. I love your storytelling and hope this story will have a sequel as well. Do you have any idea if (and when :)) such a story will be published? |
![]() ![]() Hormones. |
![]() ![]() After reading and enjoying "The Catalyst", I looked for the sequel on your profile page and am glad that I did, as so far, it has been a very good story. I really hope you are still in the process of writing it and are working on an update. As well as following Legolas's growing relationships with Elrond, the twins and Lindir (who sounds really nice), it will also be interesting to find out why Rhiwion seems to hate Legolas so much. Is it something to do with the death of Bregil or are there darker forces at work? And will Balchar make another appearance? When he was sparring with Legolas, it seemed to me that he was particularly over-zealous, considering that the prince is an untried youth (probably in his early teens by human standards) who wouldn't have the muscular strength of an experienced warrior like Balchar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erm . . . can soon possibly be now since it has been months since you have updated? :) I love this story just as much as I loved the one before it. Legolas is sad but still adorable. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love what you have so far! I secretly kind of miss little elfling Legolas but I'm definitely looking forward to his maturation. Keep up the amazing work and update soon! |