Reviews for Broken Chaos
Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
Please update! Shadow would want you to! And so would the dolphin! (That I think is Maria...)
Guest chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
I LOVE IT! KEEP GOING (whips out an armful of puppy eyed chao)
Chao: Chao! (pretty please)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/12/2012
The dolphin is Maria, isn't it?
Ymaconis chapter 3 . 12/30/2011
Ok, this may just be me making completely and utterly illogical connections here, but does the dolphin kinda seem a bit like a reincarnation of Maria or something? After all, blue eyes, caring about Shadow, not acting like a normal dolphin would... Ok, I probably am getting a bit farfetched here, but that's what it's seeming like to me at the moment... Plus, I mean, Maria sounds like the type of person that would be a dolphin in her next life, since she was all kind and caring and wanting everyone to be happy...

Oh, and there's the "destroying the robots" thing. I mean, normal dolphins SOOO do not jump on robots and cause them to explode. Come to think of it, without robots being in general use right now, any dolphin wouldn't even meet one...

Meh. I think I've rambled enough... For now.
Decepticon Fan chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
What's going to happen to Shadow? Please continue. It's looking like this story is going into the Abyss of Unfinished. :-(
Serinity koshiwa chapter 3 . 1/23/2010
please continue
Cmpteraddict chapter 3 . 12/23/2009
Please continue. This sounds really cool.
The Nadcromancer chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
Are you... gonna update?

Because this story... IS FLIPPIN' AWESOME!

I really wanna find out what happens next. :'( Pwease update?
Taranea chapter 3 . 12/30/2007
yay! a very cool chappie. :) Now i do wonder why theyre taking shads to a public hospital...or if that broadcast was fake. ;)

the idea with maria as a dolphin is cute, anyway...would love to see this continue!
Taranea chapter 2 . 12/29/2007
wow, this story is completely awesome, like your last. everyone is so in character and I love the conversations between sonic/tails/knux and the robotnik segment was cool, too. :)

Its really depressing that you cant post anything for such a long time anymore...but Ive put you on author alert so the moment you feel like posting a story again, I can read it. Thanks for writing such wonderful stuff! :)
Queen Chalybeous chapter 3 . 12/11/2007
I'm guessing the dolphin is something like a reincarnation of Maria. I really like your story. It's a waste if you don't continue this story so please update this. I don't care how long I have to wait but please finish this story!
pride1289 chapter 3 . 6/27/2007
plz continue soon! plz *big adorable chibi eyes*
DarkShadowStalker chapter 3 . 2/28/2007
O...I like the dolphin...seems sorta familiar..

This story's getting really good, I hope you update, because you haven't in a while...
Obi-WanTPM chapter 3 . 8/18/2006
BioDragon chapter 3 . 8/18/2006
This is a really nice fic. Hope you update soon, I can't wait. The dolphin is cool and the 'implacations' she has I get. Very cool.
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