Reviews for Makoto's Pain
FoxyFox chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
This story is awesome, it's like a whole different side of Makotos life. There could be a bit of work on grammar an comas, (Hehe not like I'm one to talk) but other than that, it's fantastic.
Rakkun chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Well that was a quickly epilogue, but it's al right! I like the story QAQ poor Mako chi :'c asdasd and omg RIIN i love that type of bromance! They're true BROS! Q_Q too beautiful! 3 asdfsadf nice story really TAT *snif snif*
Rakkun chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
omg omg! MAKO CHI! ;AAA; be okay please! .
Rakkun chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Omg! :c Mako chi i want to hug u T.T
Rakkun chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
D:! MY MAKO CHI! DSADSAD POOR THING QAQ!
BeachChic13 chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
Interesting. not a bad story.
kousykes chapter 4 . 8/28/2013
This end was wonderful and omygosh Riiiin QAQ You did a great job *throwsfower peals at you*
sHirou chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
otsukaresama deshita XD thank you.
herecomestesun chapter 4 . 8/27/2013
ooohh that was a beautiful ending ;u; the fact that rin was there made me really happy. amazing story.
Blackwind137 chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
This is really good! I can't wait to read more! :3 update soon please?
erihan chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
poor Makoto, but haru chan has a big empty house he can take makoto and the twins right?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
Please write more! What happens to Makoto chan?!
AnetteRuby chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
your story is great, really complex
hell-kill chapter 3 . 8/11/2013
plz be ok makoto
Kikisan333 chapter 3 . 8/11/2013
Oh my gosh I have been waiting for a fanfiction like this thank you
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