|Reviews for There's Nothing Better Than Revenge|
| Angel Wings00 chapter 14 . 4/3
I loved this story it was simply amazing.
I couldn't spot laughing all the way through it.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/16/2016
Just two words i would like to say to describe this story KICK ASS
| moxbrose chapter 4 . 8/12/2016
Omg before I even read your description I was thinking peeking around Friends style! That so funny hahah. I love that she starts with telling jacob she broke up with edward like right off the bat. That defnitely gets his attention!
"It's always been you" AWW! YES! OTP feels right there. Ugh. That's so adorbale. I actually snorted, I can picture her gushing all this out and looking back and Quil and Embry just like :0 staring at them. I just died haha!
'Revenge haze'... I feel like this phrase will come in handy one day in real life! I love it almost as much as 'holy crow'! Seriously you need to stop I'm trying to eat dinner and every other line I start laughing! 'oh wait... I am a horny teenager' omfg
AND HE CATCHES HER! hahaha and shes like, yeah, whatre you gonna do about it?! And now she's all meek about her revenge and Jacob so knows she did something.
Hahaha how she says it! oh god Bella. Omfg she named the sledgehammer. YES! And then a jacob hug on top of it! Perfect! Even though it was a funny scene at the end I liked that she still gave Charlie an out. Even in such a humorous story like this you still stick perfectly to Bella's character. It was a great end to the chapter! I am so addicted!
| moxbrose chapter 3 . 8/12/2016
That's a perfect song! I love that she just doesn't care and she's all empowered from being a little felon hahaha. On the inside I'm so screaming 'yas girl yas! jacobs who you need!' I wish I wasnt reading this at work haha
(this is totally off topic but my coworker walked by and said my name right when I read 'i heard a voice call my name loudly' and it scared the crap out of me haha)
"Holy crow" is probably the best response I've ever read! I was dying last chapter and I had to say something this time. I love it! Fucking Paul. haha. That's right bella! Tell him off! *snaps in Z formation and flips hair* I love Paul's response too 'about time' hahahaha everyone but bella knew she didn't deserve to be stuck with him!
She's so sassy! hahaha and Paul approves of the sledgehammer! And he accepts her into the pack! Aww. She's being all affectionate and those two are just like... what has happened to bella?! that cracked me up! And I've always been team Charlie. I like though that he's hesitant because he's so worried he'll lose her again like last time. And right when she promises shes okay, THEN he's happy about it! That was perfectly written!
SHE ASKED HER COP FATHER IF SHE JUST COMMITTED A FELONY omg I cant right now I just busted out laughing hahaha ohhh charlie... and then her being so sassy to him! yes! I'm curious to see where the Cullens go with it.. Would they go to the police, and Bella's dad, to get her in trouble that way? or handle it themselves? hmm..
I am so glad theres the whole story to read so I dont have to wait for updates! I dont know how you do it with mine haha! I cant wait till I get time to read more!
| moxbrose chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
Oh my god I love that, 'literally just woke up' haze haha. That's perfect! i can so see the look on her face waking up to that.
My thought process literally went 'awe big brother emm - HE DOESNT LOVE HER?!' I was NOT expecting that! And what do you mean she doesnt love him? not that she should edward is terrible but still!
YES! Go Rosalie! You totally nailed my exact thoughts on edward and bella in the books. I always felt like bella never really wanted it and.. ugh. not even getting into it.
*screaming* YES! You are like... hitting on all of my headcanons. Oh my gosh. I always felt like there was so much more to the kiss between them! And youre making it happen!
"my best friend, my sun. my jacob" I just AWWWWWW'd so loud. That's freaking adorable. RUN TO HIM BELLA!
Is it weird I kinda get why the others went along with it? as much as she's to blame I'm glad rosalie is using her head now and sticking up for bella!
Omg she rolled out of bed I am dying hahaha. I'm glad she's got the shield (ha, shield) up now and she isnt falling for it!
'slap the smile right off his face' YES! I actually gasped when she looked at the garage. like omg no... DO IT! I love that she actually questions why the sledge hammer hahaha
SHE TOTALLY RUINED HIS CAR! YES! even moreso than the others! 'ass hole' aha he's gonna be so pissed! I cant wait to read more now! I really wanna know what they're gonna do now.. I'm worried for her! but I cannot wait to see what else she gets up to!
| moxbrose chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
This has me so excited! I am actually grinning. I can just feel the malice and the troublemaking brewing here and I am SO excited to see where this goes! *pounds desk* bring it on!
| musicaldolphingirl2011 chapter 14 . 7/30/2016
Love this story, although I find it hard to believe that Bella could actually pick up a sledgehammer and damage all of the cars without hurting herself. It would have been funnier during the party is she had taken Alice's makeup and write in her clothes and shoes since Alice is always obsessing over what to wear. Could you please do a sequel to this but from the Cullen's point of view so we can see what they're thinking during all of this?
| TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 8 . 7/20/2016
All of these revenges aren't even possible. As she is human, they would have caught her before she escaped after she destroyed their cars. All the other things are also impossible for Bella.
| rrochelle465 chapter 14 . 6/2/2016
Yay go bella finally point. Is yours...I am glad it's over and it couldn't be better if I thought of it myself lol great story great job...
| rrochelle465 chapter 13 . 6/2/2016
Man that was very intense if only bella can really tell Charlie what is going on... Well played Edward... I hope Bella end things once and for all...
| rrochelle465 chapter 12 . 6/2/2016
Aww man poor bella she lost her friend... I hope she be carefull things can get out of hand...
| rrochelle465 chapter 11 . 6/2/2016
Wow Edward. Is desperate...I hope things end soon...
| rrochelle465 chapter 10 . 6/2/2016
Wow the Cullens are not happy I bella end this soon...
| rrochelle465 chapter 7 . 6/2/2016
O boy Edward really did it now game on...
| rrochelle465 chapter 6 . 6/2/2016
Go bella you rock that was a great come a j by the way lol poor Edward he really pissed bella offf let the party begin...