Reviews for Subtlety
Jinx-lover chapter 1 . 2/6
omfG WHY IS THIS SO DAMN ADORABLE!?
Invader Abigail chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Ahhhhhh that was so sweeeeet! Wally is so adorable.
BuBuBoom chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Aww! Cute!

So what about her first name? Wouldn't Jinx West be a dead giveaway for villains? If that were her 'secret identity'...

Favorite line: ["Oh really now, Speedy boy?"] LMFAO!

I saw a few grammatical errors like missing commas. For example: ["Ooooor, you could just take mine" he answered innocently.] There should be a comma between [mine] and the ending quotation mark. :)
You should look up dialogue punctuation on why there needs to be a comma there (if you want). Just helping...

But other than that, I thought this was well-written. Good job! :)
I like the concept of the story, and that last bit about the Heimlich... though I'm not sure if that was a sexual reference, or Wally was choking. I think the latter, but still... XD

LOL. Don't worry. We all obsess over Flinx! And they are canon. :DDDD Thank goodness! :)
Keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Hahahahah looks like we have a lot incomon about obbsesing over the cutes coupl ever
themergitonian chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Nice.
Calavera Rosa chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Aah, I can totally see this happening! Great fic! Love how you write these two!
Webberfish chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
What a great piece of work! How cute is that? Loved the ending especially. Please keep writing for this couple, you nailed their personalities!
GoneAbsolutelyMad chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Hey. You. I like you. This was romance without choking fluff, and it's written so well. I like the very last line. :P
Mysty Star chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Oh my gosh. Where did you come up with this? This is great! Excellent job! Definitely keep writing stories!
KKsaiyancat chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Technically, Flinx is still cannon. Kid Flash/Artemis isn't Teen Titans-verse, so Jinx and Kid Flash may remain together for ever (for all we know).

But this was cute! I'd love to see a sort-of sequel to this of Flash finding out Jinx 'borrowed' the last name West. That'd be hilarious XD.

Keep writin'!
-KK
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
HEEEEEEEEEEY. this is your tired reviewer from your other Flinx oneshot today. Still excellent. This one made me scream with the fluff and perfection. :D i promise, a thorough analysis is coming tomorrow- on all of the awesomeness that is your Flinx oneshots. but can i say now that i am truly amazed that English is your second language? your writing is remarkably clean, better than most native English speakers, I'd say. Thanks for posting, I'm loving your work :D
HappyFace1886 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Hi, this was so cute! n_n there aren't enough Flinx fanfics out there so seeing this one was a joy. I loved their interaction. Hehe, Kid Flash definitely is sappier than Jinx, that's for sure.

I'm currently slowly filling a blog with lots of Flinx love. Feel free to browse it. Just wanted to share we Flinx lovers must stand united!

flinxforever . blogspot

I'd write at ff. net, but this website and I do not get along. xD

Hope to read more from you