Reviews for Heartbeat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's a good story however, you made sakura into a spineless piece of shit. Which she is not. No woman even sakura will ever withstand this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HELL YEAHHH, THIS IS LIKE THE ANGSTIEST THING EVER AND SO WELL WRITTEN AND DAMN SASKEH, YOU BETTER TREAT SAKURA LIKE A PRINCESS FROM NOW ONNNNN |
![]() ![]() Noooooooo! Come back! Please! We finally over the angst part! I'm sure there will be more drama but noooooooo! Come back! I need it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is absolutely adorable. For starters, I’m not a fan of the pairing, and I found myself frustrated with Sakura, especially in the early chapters where she seemed a bit too spineless. However, as the story progressed, I began to understand the deeper purpose behind her character development. I can truly appreciate the direction you’ve taken as a writer—it’s brilliantly done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this! Thank you so much for posting it. Such preciously genuine story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Howdy! Wow! What a great story. I enjoyed the inner monologue of both Sasuke and Sakura. It feels true to their characters and it’s a good basis to see how much they grow as this story progresses. Great job at portraying them in such a logical, heartfelt way. Thank you for sharing your story. |
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![]() ![]() This intensity and drama and everything and Sakura being honest with him and he with her made his heartbeat and the smile and care and love he knew he had for his beautiful Waifu Blossom Queen love Naruto too he always rooting for them and we real fans and stans adoringly love all three so much BELIEVE IT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plzz we’ll need more than 1 chap of fluff after all that angst to recover |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much angst build up for perfect ending, it was heart-wrenching and beautiful at the same time, thank you for posting this... |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writing style of this book is amazing but the book itself doesn't really make any sense... It keeps going back and forth between them and sasuke expecting her to express her emotions when he can't even talk to her properly doesn't really sit well with me... It's being abit hypocritical... Also sakura loves sasuke yes but to this extent is abit unrealistic |
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![]() ![]() I know this was an AU story but great writing job because this story was realistic in Canon firm and simply real and beautiful a so SasuSaku and I freaking love them so much and they are forever and always to me and built different but built strong to persevere and last. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful story love love love love SasuSaku so much and they are built different but built strong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que hermoso fic |