|Reviews for Second Chance|
| The White Leopard chapter 25 . 6/2
So basically I love this fic (and its brief prequel) and never before have I been so in love with Victus. I really like your portrayal of both him and Shepard and I think you did the other characters justice (though out of all the councilors, Sparatus was my favorite in game; I suppose every story needs its villains regardless). Thank you for sharing your work. Keep on writing.
| ctmmanigame chapter 15 . 6/19/2015
kaidan es un marica.
| Unnamed Wanderer chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
All good stories start with: "No shit, there I was..."
| SilverRed chapter 25 . 9/26/2013
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
Very good! You should write a sequel about after the war with Victus and Shepard - I'd love to read about a protective Victus fighting off politicians and reporters while dealing with a Shepard scarred by the war. Maybe they adopt a kid too?
Also I'd like to read about Tali recreating the Geth (and maybe EDI? :D). I don't think that's been done before (of course there aren't many that pair Shepard and Victus :P).
Sequel! Sequel! *resumes chant*
| Musicalrain chapter 25 . 9/25/2013
Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this story, and the fact that it is over is bittersweet. :'3
I liked how Adrien being on the Normandy during the final battle did affect what we see in-game. But I'm even more glad for the ending here. I look forward to seeing the news too. :D
| sbing0304 chapter 25 . 9/25/2013
I loved it! You made me love Victus! When I play ME3 I see him in a different light.
| Vulpixer chapter 25 . 9/25/2013
Hurray for orders! \o/ *sighs softly* I'll be sad to see this go, but it was still such a lovely fic. Thanks so much for the ride. -
| Musicalrain chapter 24 . 9/21/2013
We're getting close to the final battle!
Loved all of Adrien's observations here. I'm eagerly awaiting the next bit!
| sbing0304 chapter 24 . 9/20/2013
Is the next chapter going to be your last? It seems like it's getting pretty close to the end.
| Musicalrain chapter 23 . 9/18/2013
Fluffy ending is fluffy. :3
And the councilor did not see that coming. *evil giggle*
| sbing0304 chapter 22 . 9/18/2013
I loved the chapters! I'm glad Shepard realized it wasn't Victus and they are together on the Normandy!
| Musicalrain chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
Awww! They're reunited again!
I liked Javik's involvement in this chapter too! Angry-Shepard was also awesome. The councilor should be afraid. lol. :P
| Dolce Latte van Creme chapter 22 . 9/16/2013
Very good! You update so much, and this fic is so nicely written- I think I'm in heaven! Ooh, I so cannot wait to see where else you'll take things!
| Vulpixer chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
Damn you flamethrower welding Vorcha! XD hee hee Can't wait to see the next chapter. -
| Musicalrain chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
Well... I did not expect it to go quite like that!
This chapter was very detailed! I can clearly see the work put into it and I definitely can't wait for more of this awesomeness! Victius is getting quite the workout trying to escape. Hehe.