Very cute fic!

The story itself was great, I really love this concept and you conveyed it splendidly. But all the spelling and grammatical mistakes were horrible. Even though English isn’t my native language, the mistakes were very noticeable. Don’t you have a beta? Why are almost all of the questions asked by characters written in a direct order and not reverse? Ahh how I wish someone edited it (honestly I was itching to do it myself while reading). Would’ve been a much greater work.

Это такая замечательная работа..
Вы сгорели мне сердце.

I'm gonna pretend, just for funsies, that the Vinsmokes bought Sabo, because they would.

Thatch going on a mission, the warning that some events will be happening earlier... Please tell me we aren't about to have a Murder Teach on our-
(reaches The Part Of The Chapter) SON OF A BITCH

Thank you for this amazing and wholesome story. I am looking for the next one, and good luck with school.

I didn't know how often I came back to this story to read it. I just love it.

I cried my heart out reading this chapter, why you gotta do this to me

What an incredible ride! I laughed, I cried and it's 3am here, but I couldn't stop reading. The slow development of the connection between the boys and the crew were just too adorable and the plot twists had me at the edge of my seat. Boy, am I glad Ace didn't burn Sabo too much and that Teach didn't kill Thatch and that they found Sabo before he was taken away. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this amazing story with the world. I can't wait to recommend it to my friends and read it again. Please never stop writing! Seriously, you're really talented.

Aww I'm glad I found this! It's really cute so far

I just wanted to say, that the name of the head nurse is called Whisky, and she is wayyyyy nicer then this Lyra person.

Such a great story, ASL Whitebeards warms my heart to no end! I loved it! Really great pacing, lovely interactions and I read it all in one go! Thank you for writing this amazing fanfic! Absolutely adored it!

Gahhhh, it's so cute! I love it! Nice happy ending, I could cry. Also Marco is adorable in this, nice story

Oh thank god, he was only sold

Was Sabo raped?