Thatch: "We took them out and I found something really cool"

Me: Oh, shit

Ace: "It's a fruit"

Me: Oh, fuck, NO

He was too busy showing off his prize to notice the slowly growing smirk on the face of the large man sitting behind him

Me: *Growls and cracks knuckles* Teach, don't you fucking DARE. Not only is Thatch a nice guy who doesn't deserve to die, but three lovable little boys will be VERY sad.

Will you make a sequel to this?

I love it! Nice way to end it... very smooth

I love how you had this incident make Ace and Sabo realized their responsibility over Ace

I love the ending how you would explain Luffy's thoughts. Sounds just like him.

I would love if in the sequel it would continue after story in the first few chapters then skips to Luffy leaving like in the third chapter of your other story and then the Strawhat pirates don't know that luffy had any connection to the Whitebeard pirates and the strawhats get captured by really strong Marines (because weaklings aren't good enough for them) and Whitebeard pirates rescue them and the strawhats all have individual reactions and there's loads of ASL fluff and Marco and Luffy fluff and Family fluff and nakama Fluff! but that's just my opinion, and this story was awesome. Loved it! Have a nice day/night/morning!

Reread this story again. I like it. Will there be a sequel soon?

Puedes hacer una secuela me gusto mucho y Luffy va tener sus propios nakamas

This was just the best! I am so glad that I read it! You did such a great job with characters that we really don't know much about! I know my headcanons for this crew will be what you wrote from now on. I am so glad that I read this! In all honesty I was going to give this fic a pass because I thought it was going to be a crack fic, but I am so glad that I decided to give it a try because it is the best! I love this AU that you've created! You write the brothers so well too! Great job!

I like to imagine that Canon has been messed up by them being there ie Thatch wouldn't have found the fruit for years unless he'd gone in that mission which he wouldn't have unless he hurt his ribs, see?

I love your story! I have read it twice already and it is really captivating. I like the idea of Ace, Sabo and Luffy having adventures with the whitebeard crew. Everyone is just so cute, especially Luffy! I enjoyed so much. 3

So would Luffy not make his own crew in this time line?

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That was soo sweet
Keep on the writes

you know, I'm hoping to see shanks pop out here or there,
or at least, luffy mention shanks and the crew reaction,
I think that would be funny,
but
thanks for thr good story~

I noticed some odd word choices, like sale where it would be sell, shuttered where it would be shuddered and cloths where it would be clothes. I mention this only because it jolted me out of the story a bit.

But this is the second time I read this story and I love it just as much on the second read-through. Young ASL is just too cute!