Reviews for Somewhere To Belong
Soul'sGlitters chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
that sassy Luffy ;'D
DemonQueen16 chapter 24 . 3/25/2015
I know at the end of these things you are supposed to leave a big long review about how you felt .If it was awesome if it was suckish or whatever you thought it was supposed to write that though but this story was beautiful in its simplicity it wasn't like one of those flashy big stories that had no end in it. It was like you went on a journey with them as they were incorporated in life on the Moby Dick and their struggle in the face of slavery. it was really awesome so good job nice story I really looking forward to what you write done
Mary D. Sue chapter 24 . 3/19/2015
This is the most amazingly wonderful ASL fanfic I have ever read, though I might be a little biased due to an all-consuming ardor for the Whitebeards in general.
MysteryGirl chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
I Iove you story so much! I just can't believe it had ended just like though...I was hoping to read like what will happen once they joined and Bla bla bla! So please if you have time can you right another story about them? I wanna know whether Luffy will still follow his dream or not! And u know what will happen to acme and sank also, so please create a new story again!

Nea-Nyx chapter 24 . 3/2/2015
yeah! that was awesome!
and while you're at it, rewrite the whole story too!
i wanna see how they end up in the future when they're all grown up!
will luffy still make his own crew?
will sabo be somehow drafted into the revolutionaries' ranks?
and will ace end up, ugh i hat to say this, dead?
there's so many questions and you dear author have the answer!
please do consider this plot!
LittlemissLazy chapter 24 . 2/18/2015
Oh Ghad! I love your story! It's so adorable! ASL with the Whitebeard Pirates. I love how you portray Marco, Thatch and Namur being close to the three brothers. I also love the cuteness this story brings (you have the most dangerous weapon of all XD). So this leaves an open ending? Can i have the freedom to think that Luffy will eventually set out in the sea for his own Adventure and finding his own nakama to become the Pirate King since he promised Shanks right? And i just love the Straw Hat crew, Sorry! XD

Lastly, I wonder what happened to Teach, I think he sank in the ocean in the middle of the storm like a hammer since he stole (probably had eaten) Thatch's Devil fruit Lol!

PS. I really love your story. So light and warm!
Colubra chapter 5 . 2/10/2015
"In here I am God."
Ahahahah! Loved that moment and loved Lyra
BlueSkyz963 chapter 24 . 2/10/2015
This has to be the best one piece story I have read. I could read this again and again and again and not get bored. I'm so happy I found this! Even if I did find it ages ago. I fell in love with this story on the 1st chapter. Not much stories do that so well done. ;D
spectrepup chapter 24 . 2/3/2015
Omfg. I'm actually going to cry this was amazing and I'm so glad I read it. Totally worth staying up until I have to leave for school in a couple hours. Just. I'm fairly certain this made my week. Thank you so much for blessing the world with this gift
MisanthropicGoddess chapter 22 . 2/1/2015
Oh gosh. I thought Sabo was raped. Thank gods that's not it. Phew
MisanthropicGoddess chapter 6 . 2/1/2015
Kyaa Marco. I really REALLY like him. And he's so much of a mother hen he can almost compete with Makino. Haha., I'm so glad I found this fic. :)
Fujisaki Vargas chapter 24 . 1/20/2015
Sorry for my english but I felt in love for your story!
Luffy, Sabo and Ace were a cute childs X)
When I saw Luffy's past, ASL become my favorite trio for One Piece.
Please can you write another stories with ASL as a main character?
Thank you!
neveragainX chapter 24 . 1/15/2015
wow. just ... wow! i can't believe it was only 24 chapters. and i loved every single one of it!
thank you for writing such an awesome story!
authenticaussie chapter 24 . 1/15/2015
Ahh oh gosh I love this fic so so much! It's got a perfect mix of cute and sad and the plot was really really well pulled off. The characters were so wonderfully written, and there were so many times I giggled to myself while reading this! I loved reading about the little ASL brothers and their adventures, and the development as they slowly joined crew was perfection.
There were so many times I wanted to reach out and pick them up and hug them! Oh precious babies don't be sad, the Whitebeards shall be your family!
The ending was absolutely tooth rotting and I had the bIGGEST grin once, you would believe how perfect the last chapter was.

There's only a few constructive criticisms I have to point out (and seriously just feel free to skip them if you want.)
I had to get recced this by a few people before I actually started reading it - I'd seen it before and clicked on it because it sounded adorable (and by Jove it was) but compared to the rest of the fic, the first two-ish chapters are seriously lacking. I get that they're plot and all, but they were relatively boring and there were a few OOC moments and a whole heap of grammatical and spelling errors that made it kind of difficult to power through until I got momentum going. First chapter is where you show us what you've got! Make everyone interested to continue, and happy they found a well characterised fic with nice grammer and spelling.
The other point is pretty much just grammar and spelling. It gets better towards the end of the fic, but there's still lots of times where the wrong word has been put somewhere - eg cloths (small pieces of fabric, usually for cleaning) and clothes (what you wear.)
that's basically the only things, though? Like everything else was really fab, and the concept was super cool to read. I want to know more about how growing up as Whitebeard pirates would have changed them! Would Luffy still end up wanting to become pirate king? Is there any point that one of them/all three get kidnapped again, but the kidnappers find out that these are most definitely NOT defenceless children? It's such a great verse! Good job!
Raphlez chapter 24 . 1/11/2015
Adorable thoroughly enjoyed the story haha I believe that everyone was in character and I love how luffy and Marco get along so well as well but poor garp broke my heart D: thanks for the great story :D
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