Reviews for Somewhere To Belong
SkittleZ chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Your awesome, this is a creative story with great characterization. I can't wait to read more!
99 luffy chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
I like where this is going.
ladeste chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Love, love, love, love, love!

Please don't let Thatch die!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Nice chapter
But if I can give little opinion, don't you think you make sabo's attitude too similiar with ace? I mean, when they eat in galley you make his reaction similiar with ace. I know he lived with ace and luffy, but before that sabo was raised by noble, he is rich, I think it seem a little unnatural to see him get confused that he can get food just like that.
Like when thatch over them to eat in galley, it is common courtesy, it's understandable if ace don't understand, but sabo must be understand.

Well just that, sorry if im blabbering
I like your story, just want you to improved and keep it up :)
Mai Kusakabe chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
This is cute *-* Those three are adorable, and I love the idea of them with the Whitebeard pirates :)
kagome11 chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
I really like this story this far, I'm sucker for stories that has the three brothers on a same ship. If Ace could be on Whitebeard's crew and be happy, I think the others can be too. After all their dream is really to be free. They can do that without their own ships. Besides Luffy wanted to join Shanks's crew. And they can be together! Marco is hilarious, when he is called pineapple head! I am really looking forward to when the trio will realize that the way they have been wrong. Keep it up!
Perhaps I can Fly chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
I do hope you continue writing. I really do enjoy this. Keep up the good work!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Luffy is right not to trust Teach! Hate that guy!
Givrali chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Luffy may not Teach? Better as the guy is not to be trusted, Luffy has good instincts. Shanks also has a small appearance? Would love to see the reactions of the crew.
Alia Inverse chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
I like that balance between the pirates thinking they are spoilt marines-to-be and ASL not opening up to anyone. The 'food fight' was very cool too. Though I wondered if the anymosity with Teach was a Luffy thing or a D. thing...
DokiWulf chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Oh my god this is fantastic, adorable and there wasn't an OOC moment to speak of! I've fallen in love with this story practically, hope you update again soon! :D
remorseofthedead chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I absolutely love this.
It was so cute and funny.
I cannot wait to see what happens.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013

Please keep the quality
And I hope you find your beta :)

Good job!
TheBlackSeaReaper chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Loving this so far! xD
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