Reviews for Somewhere To Belong
TheBlackSeaReaper chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
awesome!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Loving this so far! xD
spoons-are-evil chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
It'a barely the first chapter and I already love it! XD I have to feel sorry for Marco, taking care of those brothers is going to be quite a challenge. Haha, "Pineapple Head." I've always loved pineapple jokes. XD The Whitebeards are in for a huge surprise if they think they're spoiled. Those brothers are anything but spoiled. :) I think you've done really well with this first chapter. Their personalities are spot-on and the writing is great! I look forward to the next chapter!
Rangrids chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Woohoo! A story of Whitebeard and three brother! :D Well you had my curiosity about the Garp and Whitebeard's deal, but now you have my attention. Hope to see new chapter soon :)
Givrali chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This story is really great. Three rascals will keep the crew on their toes.
How the team will probably look when Luffy unpacks his devil powers.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
The Cloud's Essence chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Wow, very well written, and the P.O.V. changes were easy to follow with their smoothness. The characters are also kept surprisingly IC, considering what how little is known about the Whitebeards' daily personalities and interactions. I wonder what led Garp to asking Whitebeard to look after his grandchildren, and why Dadan and the other bandits couldn't "look after them" like usual. I can't wait to see how all the rest of the Whitebeards will react to the "spoiled marine brats"; they'll surely be in for a shock. Their shenanigans and mannerisms will definitely throw them off, and I'm so looking forward to the Whitebeards seeing the three eat. That'll be an experience, especially with Luffy's appetite.

I hope you are able to find a Beta reader, and good luck with our story!

Until Next Time,

Cloud E.
02FireRains chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Oh, I can see it now: the Moby Dick covered in chaos. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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