Reviews for Boy Struck by lightning
sonicthehedgehog240 chapter 35 . 7/10
To me everything was perfect my favorite part was him controlling the dead through lightning.
Born2BeGodLike chapter 35 . 7/6
Story was good. Wish hinabi and naruto had kiss before shino show up. To bad thus story wasnt adventure n romance. Would made it better. Hope sequal is.
MaDmAN12435 chapter 2 . 5/26
I don't know where you did your calculations, but 1000 yen is only 10 USD... 100,000 yen is 1000 USD.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
Is this story still in the rewrite process?
jackalope33 chapter 27 . 4/14
change it back to english in the story (or at least put the english translation next to it) it gets a bit irritating trying to figure out what's happening without scrolling up and down over and over again
jackalope33 chapter 26 . 4/14
you started off as Gamabunta as the leader (which is correct) then you changed it to Gamatatsu (which it his son/daughter (seriously its usually hard to tell with toads)). was it an accident or did you forget?
jackalope33 chapter 24 . 4/14
how did orochimaru use his hands when you previously said it was wrapped up ?
jackalope33 chapter 17 . 4/14
there is a line which is just so funny because you misspelled "training" as "painting" and i cant stop laughing at it. (its the one where Neji tells Naruto to train with Jiraiya)
arinasution5 chapter 18 . 4/14
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Jasonknndy chapter 13 . 3/27
koomi
Jasonknndy chapter 13 . 3/27
koomi
Jasonknndy chapter 12 . 3/27
88th
Jasonknndy chapter 6 . 3/27
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random fanfic reader chapter 7 . 3/18
You know it's kind of a funny coincidence that you mentioned Naruto being able to communicate with cats since I just finished watching the new Naruto Shippuden episode, and they introduced these ninja tools that look like cat ears that allow people to communicate with cats. Looks like great writers think alike.
Squarekiddo chapter 11 . 3/17
God he has such an insane weakness, he truly was unlucky when he got hit by that Lightning. Hed be stronger without it.
He could train his Lighting elemental easily enough with Sclones, only thing he would lose is that Magnet thing.

Magnet vs weak against simple gusts.
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