Thanks

I can't believe Lily would not have been able to change James' mind. My pet peeve is convenient stupidity is fiction. Otherwise intelligent people suddenly are complete idiots to preserve a faulty, easily improvable plot line. Otherwise, a very good story.

I don't like that you absolve Snape of any blame in the interactions between the Marauders and himself.

Brilliant story. Thank you for writing.

Leandro? A martial arts instructor...in Brazil? Bahaha ...you’re taking about the Brazilian buttlift dude! Too funny!

That was incredibly cheesy. But fun to read.

Really enjoying this story. Normally I don’t review until the end but I had to thank you for mentioning Mercy Ships. Even though I loathe their religious ideology, i still support them as much as I can as they do absolutely fantastic work, both in treating people but also working wit local medics wherever they moor.

It's nice to see what Harry and Hermione are doing, and I'm very glad that the Horcrux is gone.

But Cara and the twins do exist, and I bet they'd like to see Severus every once in a while, too.

What a great story - I truly enjoyed it. It was a time travel story that was different and realistic. Thank you very much for sharing it.

I was surprised how much I enjoyed this story. I'm generally not the biggest fan of Snape stories. I think I've just never been able to reconcile canon Snape to FF Snape.

But yah, really enjoyed this one. Thanks for your time and efforts in writing it.

I was hoping that you would have Regulus send Kreature to Sev with the locket plus a note about what it was and why Regulus did what he did and passing on last words to Sirius and Cara. I'm loving this story! Take care

hopefully Harry is given a little common sense next so as not to be led to the facts around him. because it doesn't need the genius to see that

I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was well written and had a really interesting plot. I also enjoyed the way you approached the challenge, it was different to how I have seen it previously done. Great job. Xx

I must confess that I have never been too fond of stories which resulted from the Don't Fear the Reaper Death Challenge (although I have read several of them), but this is a really good one. I like in particular the inclusion of Severus in the people who were sent back, and the development of his character, namely in the earlier chapters, is well executed. Only Susan Sto-Helit comes across as a bit of a caricature on occasion, but maybe this could not be avoided, given where she comes from.

Thanks for the nice read!