Reviews for Breathe!
littleyaoilover chapter 1 . 7/11
*sniffles* *nosebleed at max* *breaths heavily*
That...was...so...KAWAII!
*dies due to blood loss*
Sad but cute.
Mostly cute.
MyOwnCharacterInEverything chapter 1 . 6/14
Cute
Kacey chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
DA FLUFF IS UNBEARABLE /
MiyaSmith811 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
So cute!
Mistress of Modern Mythology chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Asdfghjkl That was precious! Thank you so much for that! It was (as Rei would say) BEAUTIFUL!
Animelover460 chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Awwee! So adorable! *-*
AunKhoune chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
This was wonderful to read, enjoyed the beginning till the end :) leaves a night warm feeling 3
iaminactive-sorry chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Really great! I think a lot of people would Haruka/Rin, but Nitori/Rin is much less OOC, and much cuter! Keep up the amazing work!
Arienna Natalitha chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
Wow. I was imagining how this would go on the anime. Fangirl squeees :3
MartySmarty1111 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Omg greattt story i lov it
Agata chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
That was very interesting... and dramatic. I like the jellyfish sting mention. I've read a book about someone's trip to Japan and encounter with some kind of jellyfish- their sting isn't lethal but very painful and can put down best swimmers. This bit made the story more realistic (I think most writers would just say Nitori got tried or something and left it there- not very realistic if you ask me)

I enjoyed. Thank you.
ClyDaAvatarFan chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Awwww it's too cute for words to describe! PLZ continue! o
Thank you XD chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Thanks for giving some love to my free!otp! XD
Molly chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Ermhagd XD Cute! Great written my friend!
chocolate rules333 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Aww...! This story was really cute . I enjoyed the sweet ending. Am I allowed to ship Rin/Nitori too because I think I ship everything. :)
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