Please no more gay jokes. Seriously, please no more; my ethics are biting me already. BUT ALSO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! This story is MARVELOUS and SO cool!

In chapter two, Pitch and Jack joke about dark and edgy topics that I’m NOT a fan of. But, otherwise, This. Story. Is. AMAZING! IM SO HOOKED!

THIS IS SO WICKED AWESOME! I’m also having a ton of fun imagining Pitch as a teenager… X)

I REALLY WANT MORE THIS IS JUST GETTING GOOD

omigosh I like this so muchhiauhdnksjd

never seen a fanfic where frost is frigging jacked with money

Can you please continue? And also...poor jack. I really think Pitch did it. Probably everyone who has read this does. It’s so sad to learn that jacks dad doesn’t want anything to do with this, his sister and mom are dead and everyone else hates jack poor poor jack

So you most likely arent uodating again and thats too bad.

It's too bad, I really liked this... :)

Hey just wanted to ask what happened to the story i know you said it was not your best but I really enjoyed it so if ya could let me know

I LOVED THIS STORY! I FINISHED ALL 5 CHAPTERS WITHIN 2 HOURS, IT WAS SO GOOD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! OH, PLEASE CONTINUE THE INVISIBLE DRABBLES BECAUSE THEY EXPLAIN SOO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ THIS COMMENT, HOPE YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY/ AND OR NIGHT!

Where is the next chapter !

I feel like crying for everything that Jack's been through... I mean... all this because a squirrel was murdered. I really love all the happenings... I HOPE PITCH ROTS IN HELL! He'll always be evil no matter what angle you look at him. PLEASE UPDATE FAST or IM GONNA DIE BECAUSE OF THE SUSPENSE!

Good idea bunny punch someone with hypothermia great idea !

Pitch, you fool !

Omg I think I'm in love hehe yes!