|Reviews for A Sickness Known As Hate|
| ankhesenamun2 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
This was wonderful. I throughly enjoyed reading it. Don't really know what that tells you about me ;) But anyways it was well-written and the angle about the hate you used was fabulous. I agree with you that people tended to shy away from their violent side a bit too much... oo! I should go write a violent story! but no. too much effort... whoa dude squirrel, focus. Awesome story! I liked how you showed the other meanings in the (). ok, I'm done xD
| Lenore91 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
This is really good! I can feel the sadism and the layers to roads obsessions. I really loved that she fantasised and it worked so well.
I'm not particularly a fan of gore (I think it's a great element for near all fics, but i wouldnt normally click on something like this) but this worked really well. I was cringing really badly at the kneecap/eye bits.
Brackets were brilliant! Loved it!
In regards to improvement... More punctuation. The story does flow well, yes, but certain areas... Should they have !, ?, :, ;, etc? Just to further grasp the importance placed. :)
The simple sentence variation works well for normalising what Road's doing, though I'd enjoy to see what you'd emphasise using punctuation.
| Midnight Phantasma chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
First time writing horror? Well, it's my first time reading horror, so I really can't give you much advice on that. Sorry! But still, I surprised myself by reading this, considering I'm a very queasy person, and would have probably gotten sick if it had gotten any more descriptive, though I admit my stomach churned a few times during the part when Road was destroying her kneecap. Ranting aside, I thought this was actually very good and in character. You're right, people do tend to forget the Noah's sadistic side. As much we'd like to imagine this cool family of villains who can be somewhat silly sometimes, they definitely have their demented sides. It's been proven too many times to count. You did a really good job on this, and I enjoyed the style in which you wrote this. It was really interesting, and I just loved the theme you chose. Very fitting!(: Anyway, I'll stop bothering you and go about my business(; Haha, good job!;D