Reviews for Mafia Z
Kitten Carmical chapter 12 . 12/24/2014
Update update UPDATE! Pretty please with a cherry on top?
Randomstrike chapter 12 . 12/23/2014
Yes! I love older gohan. This is getting real juicy
thanks!
Volcanic chapter 12 . 12/20/2014
I will admit. I was skeptical of the premise for this fanfiction. But you've really surprised me! It's intensely creative and well thought out. The alternate universe makes sense and characters are both familiar and different. I also adore all the little throwbacks to minor character (what up Emperor Pilaf) and how you bring in even minor side characters.

Keep up the good work. I am excited to see everything hit the fan in the next few chapters.

-V
libbyluvs chapter 12 . 12/18/2014
"The sexy fan?!" Asks hopefully.

That was great btw. I can hear all of they're voices and picture it all in my head. It's great.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/16/2014
Please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon with the next chapter
Penguinone chapter 11 . 9/11/2014
Such a well written AU! It's so cute, I love the slow but steady development. I really hope to ee another update soon!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15/2014
More, I need more! This is beautiful, please your only mistake is stopping. There are no words to fathom how much I love this and how well you write it
libbyluvs chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
Not afraid to review! Dayum! I will wait patiently for this one to finish.
Dragon96 chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
I love your story! :D And I can't wait to read more!

Thanks so much for sharing!
Chem-Death chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
I enjoyed reading what others think of how Namek reproduces and I like to see that partnership is important. I also liked the interaction between Gohan and Piccolo as well as Nail here. It brings a warm feeling.
Though, I am confused by what you mean "defined" for Nail. I can see that he's well developed character.

Now I'm curious if Piccolo going to purposely tease Gohan or keep conscious about his actions.
Chem-Death chapter 10 . 7/3/2014
I was wondering what's the hold up, but this is good. I sense the emotion from the characters and really feel for them. I have read mangas relating to physiological warfare such as Liar Games, Eyeshield 21, and One Outs. For someone like a Don such as Piccolo, there will be attacks from the outside and the inside. Since Guru is sick, how long will he last to see his "plan" come to fruition? Hopefully, he died of his own disease instead of a murder.
Looking forward for the next chapter. :)
Redqueen66 chapter 9 . 5/21/2014
Update update update please need more PLEASE!
Kitten Carmical chapter 9 . 3/25/2014
More? Pleas ; ( *sniffle*
RedQueen666 chapter 9 . 3/2/2014
OMG don't stop this story is amazing please update soon cause I need to know what happens next badly xXxXx
Cari0 chapter 9 . 2/13/2014
This story is AMAZING! I really enjoy the added mafia aspect. I hope you will continue it soon. I cannot wait to see what will happen next.
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