Very nice story. It felt more like a dark comedy from the beginning, seeing as the acolyte could just create buildings of of thin air like that. Thoroughly enjoyable!

The problem with this fic is that it clashes with itself. It's meant to be dark and disturbing but I just can't take it seriously because its constant 4th wall breaks ruin my immersion.
"The Tutorial", "off-screen", "upgrade button", "missions", "campaigns", and so on, are things that do not exist in the Warcraft universe, and no one should be aware of them. If you want to integrate gameplay mechanics into the story, an in-universe explanation must be provided.
What am I reading? Is this a crack fic? There's not enough humor for that. Is this a serious dark fic? 4th wall breaks do not belong in these.

Genius... you Genius son of a gun... Imma copy your Idea, WHY DIDN'T I ISEKAI AN NPC!?

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God damn dude that 7th chapter gave the chills!

Great work

I liked the beginning well enough, what with the crash between game mechanics and relatively real world dynamics at play... toward the end of the story however I must say the story was getting more and more all over the place, not to mention between the mood and especially the plot threads.

It was interesting and funny.

For those that wish to see more of this you can see a snippet of what could have been more on sufficientvelocity. threads/the-shadenight123-corner-hugs-need-not-apply.15425/page-51#post-3685682 it's the thread mark titled Death Knight of Zero

The Damned stand ready.
One word ...uh sentence

I honestly liked your approach. It was always easy taking the path where acolite is just someone to summon buildings while Louise relives the canon. You went for amazing deviation from it and made it truly seem like the real scourge. The only fault I found was the a bit tok fast turning of luis morals. Would enjoy slow corruption more. All in all 8.5/10

This is so unexpectedly awesome

...too little, too late.

I mean... did we expect the spoiled brat to last any longer? Honestly?

That was an amazing story, one that I didn't expect the get as invested in as much as I did. You blended humor and tragedy in a way that I never could. Heck, I almost teared up during the end chapters; so bravo to you my friend!
May the Scourge continue their glorious march upon the world, and may Louise hopefully see it all to pass. Huzzah!

this had to have been the best damn FoZ story I have ever read.