|Reviews for The Lost City- 37th Hunger Games|
| Jocylin chapter 18 . 1/2
this was pretty good wish i could have seen a bit more of my character but whatevs haha XD whyd you stop writing btw?
| K. A. Oceana chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
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| Trustme12 chapter 18 . 10/14/2013
I think Shannie should use a Machete and master it! it would be so unexpected to the other tributes and make the games even better, especially since she's scared of many things!
| Show-Out chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
Its nice to see some of the final pieces being placed into the alliances. I can already tell the Games are going to be phenomenal. Keep em coming!
| Show-Out chapter 17 . 8/29/2013
Nice work with this one! You never disappoint. :)
| Phantasia515 chapter 18 . 8/28/2013
I love all these plans that they're all making so far. I can't wait to see how they will all turn up when they get into the arena. I bet all the plans won't work out completely! I love how Thalia's focusing on all the survival skills, people always tend to ignore those.
| stick-at-nought shady chapter 18 . 8/28/2013
these tributes are really well written! these are going to be a really interesting games (yeah, i know i keep saying that but it's SO TRUE :D )
| Beauty.Is.Strange chapter 17 . 8/27/2013
Oh some romance! Anyhow! I think Erica should either do archery or throw knives for the PS, but Gus should countinue his excellent job with spear *sneers in background*.
| Buttons301 chapter 17 . 8/26/2013
Go Blaise! If he expects to die, then I think be should kill the highest ranking Gamemaker during private sessions. He'll die, but I think he'd like to take one out.
| shinyshannie chapter 17 . 8/26/2013
Finally ;) this is epic as always and 2 points to me yay! Kinda feel loke Harry Potter earning points... but we don't lose them in this case ;)
| Show-Out chapter 16 . 8/23/2013
I liked this chapter, getting multiple view points from different tributes.
I'm going to guess February.
| shinyshannie chapter 16 . 8/19/2013
| torystory93 chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
| Beauty.Is.Strange chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
I'm going to go with December
| stick-at-nought shady chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
Idk, great chapter! I liked the POVs, it was really different in a good way