|Reviews for Longing Flowers|
| ace chapter 1 . 9/10
It would be better you though
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
Make another chapter please
| Eren starkwether chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
More more more the story is great you need to write more for me
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
| jenjenloveanime chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
This is so cute you should make a sequel to this.
| Angel-Rei-chan1 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I like the story and the ending was very cute 3
I must say my english too isn't that good , but still : here are a few mistakes :
( Don't take it as offense ! I want to help a bit ! I personaly hate it to look over my storys and see mistakes !so I always ask someone to look it over )
- his back ached
- stripping habits were / stripping habit was
- he has gotten lost
-after getting used to the dark
- Flame queen is no insult .maybe princess . Queen is more ike mighty and princess more like girly and weak .
I hope I coud help you a bit : )
| DeathToPink300 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
this is hilarious and i can toataly see natsu sleeping in grays bed instead of lucys.
| asu-meme i-meme-zu chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Hehe! How nice! Isn't Gratsu week so awesome? The ending was hilarious! XD Admit it Gray! You like her!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
| KarouUchiha chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Aw it's funny it looks like Lucy kicked Natsu out for the day.