Reviews for Internal Affairs
deemura chapter 3 . 7/14
ah, clever, jack the ripper
deemura chapter 2 . 7/14
hah! it's Thomas , is it?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/23/2016
Please finish this! I'm dying from the cliffhangers here.
embeekay chapter 8 . 7/12/2015
Please please please update!
Silencebeyondthestars chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
I love this story so so much!
Empress-of-Verace chapter 8 . 4/1/2014
Wait what? Omg I'm now scared to read the next chapter! :O
Rocking the Redhead chapter 8 . 3/31/2014
Yep I knew it. Better get rid of Sarah quick
Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 8 . 3/31/2014
so from finding murderer, went to finding mother-er ... xD
i tried
lol
louvreangel chapter 7 . 3/20/2014
I actually quite like this fanfiction and the plot you're sticking with. Nice going :)
Brytte Mystere chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
It's really cool! But I kind of feel pity for Sarah, I hope she'll find someone who loves her...
Empress-of-Verace chapter 7 . 2/21/2014
Ouch...cant wait to see what happens next! :D

-Empress of Verace
Renaissancebooklover108 chapter 7 . 2/20/2014
Ohhh I love it :D
MorbidbyDefault chapter 7 . 2/20/2014
oh gosh...such an intense chapter. oooh, i'm really worried about how tom is going to react. I mean, he already broke things off with her...so he shouldn't be upset about it at all, but that's not how i think it's going down. lol. great job, and i very much look forward to the next chapter. DUN DUN DUUNNN...SHOWDOWN! lol
wordgirl75 chapter 6 . 2/12/2014
ooooo, youve got some great suspense built up! i was expecting the murder to be patricia! good twist.
GoldenVine chapter 6 . 2/4/2014
I'm so excited about this story! I just want them to be together and that horrible Thomas. I do love Mary though ;)
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