Reviews for Little Flashes
thunnababy chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Oops! I hope Garrett didn't overhear what she said. ;)
twilightladies chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Oooh dirty dirty! I like it!
Feels like there's a story there!
maxandmo chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Twill...you dirty little perv. LMAO!
amelia chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
oh no! hilarious!
amelia chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
that was awesome!
ameliaj chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
if i put a frown face in my chapter 2review, i MEANT:) *facepalm*
amelia chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
my heart was racing! i hate those forced last moments:(
great writing!
amelia chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
love it! when i read,"My world shattered.
I wanted to scream at him, hit him, and tear the whore out of his arms, but I couldn't move,"
i had to go check for angst or romance in desciption. i got scared! but then it was romance and i was happy. really so many feelings in the first sentences alone:D
lilsunnysaunt chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Naughty naughty! Hehe. Thanks for sharing!
GeekChic12 chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
LOVE this! Such great use of that era's slang. I could completely see this as it was happening. Amazing. :)
Capricorn75 chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
I bet he flew straight to confessional!
DawnsWhimsy chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Hmm somebody was more bashful than he thought.
NKubie chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Congrats on the Honorable Mention!

I like that the prompt brought on a whole different time/setting for you. Very creative. And it seems like your reaction and the man's reaction were very similar. LOL
Edward's spouse chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
interesting. later
GothicTemptress chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
LOVE IT!
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