Reviews for Little Flashes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oops! I hope Garrett didn't overhear what she said. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh dirty dirty! I like it! Feels like there's a story there! |
![]() ![]() Twill...you dirty little perv. LMAO! |
![]() ![]() oh no! hilarious! |
![]() ![]() that was awesome! |
![]() ![]() if i put a frown face in my chapter 2review, i MEANT:) *facepalm* |
![]() ![]() my heart was racing! i hate those forced last moments:( great writing! |
![]() ![]() love it! when i read,"My world shattered. I wanted to scream at him, hit him, and tear the whore out of his arms, but I couldn't move," i had to go check for angst or romance in desciption. i got scared! but then it was romance and i was happy. really so many feelings in the first sentences alone:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naughty naughty! Hehe. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE this! Such great use of that era's slang. I could completely see this as it was happening. Amazing. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet he flew straight to confessional! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm somebody was more bashful than he thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on the Honorable Mention! I like that the prompt brought on a whole different time/setting for you. Very creative. And it seems like your reaction and the man's reaction were very similar. LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. later |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |