|Reviews for Something to Protect|
| WraithReaper chapter 4 . 1/21/2014
an't wait for the next one!
| Neonfartiez chapter 3 . 11/18/2013
Ooo interested now, you can't stop _
| SamoaCookie chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
NO! Fenris get off your emo butt and save Hawke!
| WraithReaper chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Liking this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
| M.L. Groves Moved chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
How the third chapter ended makes me wonder how often you plan on switching the perspectives between Fenris and Hawke. (Will there be other perspectives? I honestly hope not, the two should be fine, but I was curious.)
I this straight through and found it to be a good start. You have some spelling errors and grammar mistakes here and there, but it doesn't make it hard to read or ruin the flow of the story. I admit, the first chapter seemed to a little slow, since you were giving off a lot of background information in Hawke's mind towards how he's feeling and the current events of the story, but it sped up once the story got out of Hawke's mind and on to the problem at hand.
So far, the story is good and I'd love to see what else you have planned with it!
I think I've been reading too many Female Hawke/Fenris stories, because despite this being a Male Hawke, my mind kept imagining a female. lol