Reviews for The First and Final Kiss
SolarCorona chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
tkkari3 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
sad sad sad i don't like it write another chapert it whould be really good i guess it would be
after tk kissed kari he was crying by her bed and then joe came in and said kari time was up then out of now were the powers of hope and light saved kari's life his tears dissappered and tk and joe ran out with happies to tell the others what just happen so then everyone ran it to the room kari was sitting waitting
Takari FOREVER chapter 1 . 3/4/2010

great fic.
Koatan chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
beautiful, sad, and touching :)
Shiori the Weaver of Dreams chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Love the story because I love tragegdy like this. Ah to die a death of bullets and to have one you love never confess.

takari love chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Oh man, I;m really cryibng...
The-Goggle-Girl-Aqua chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
Omigosh! HOW COULD YOU KILL KARI? I was crying my eyes out! Who in their right minds would kill Kari? NO! Again, HOW COULD YOU KILL KARI? I am about to break my keyboard at the moment! HOW COULD YOU KILL KARI? OMIGOSH! HOW COULD YOU KILL KARI?

That seems like a right, fine review. Hope you like it!

~Aqua Marie
Geo Fighter chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
It's so sad WA :'( no Hikari can't die she's just too cool NO! *Crys himself to sleep* :'(
kiyoiyuki chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
yup, you're right. I cried. ;;

very nice writing... though I noticed you used "like a rag doll" a lot for analogies of someone getting shot or something. even though it's a good analogy, I only read two fics and it was in both of them. so, might want to try some variety, but otherwise it's good. and sad at the same time... -sniff-
abandonmental chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
:bursts into loud and anoyying tears: Oh my... another gem from gemini.
Phil Good chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
You suck ass!

Just kidding:).

How could you kill my hottie? Oh, well. Good story.
Stephanie chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
So sad but so good, you got talent!
snowmouse chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
YOU KILLED HER? YOU MURDERER! (i stink at spelling!)
dragon tamer chapter 1 . 12/23/2004
Crap!That story is sad but good!
xoxanime-loverxox chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
u have to make it soo sad..."sob sob"... anyways...good sad...




I'm glad i got that over with!.'



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