|Reviews for Love gone wrong|
| emowoods205 chapter 1 . 3/31
This is so amazing yet sad...Naruto loved Sasuke so much yet he was raped to death by the Uchiha..I bet still loved Sasuke as he was being fucked to death..and then Sasuke was seriously fucking insane raping his best friend knowing it hurt the other and taking pleasure in Narutos pain and agony in Narutos screams of pain and cries for him to stop...the way Sasuke used Sharingan on Naruto so easily no remorse was so sad but intense..and then even afte Sasuke kinda knew Naruto was dead he kept fucking his corpse and ejaculated in him (I love the slight Necrophilia! Such a great touch..3..) and then Sasuke realized Naruto was really dead and got pissed off and threw up...poor Naru the victim of such evil...I think the part that affectes me the most was the fact that the guards found Sasuke huddled in a corner with Narutos corpse in his arms crying about how he truly loved Naruto...and then it's even more sad because Naruto is obviously in heaven and Sasuke is going to hell.. they'll never get to have a happy ending...this is truly beautiful... I love this so much and would die for a sequel like reincarnations or something..
| catspats31 chapter 1 . 1/20
While the writing quality of your story is great, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:
"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."
You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted like AdultFanfiction.
| GoodGurlGone5 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Woah! Twisted and surprisingly I liked it...
I know I'm weird but that was an interesting story so... Thank you :)
| Pandora Eagle chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
I really liked this story, but the anguish and heartbreak has me crying every time I read it :.( it's well written, and I think you should write another, just maybe with a happier ending next time :)
| JChan2845 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Wow that's something a little brutal but it was still good/heartbreaking...would you write another one like this?
| Labyrinth-chan chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Well, i'm merely speechless actually, as i thought this'll be like any other rough story, but this story? So insane and crazy, yet why i didn't slash this one is very weird & worried me for some reasons.
Maybe, it's due to your writing skill, and i like the ending, on how Sasuke's surely loves Naruto, though it's already too late. I do expect Naruto will die here, but not expected the cause to be that way. I don't know what i should feel; happy? disgust? satisfy? lust? sad? Lastly i just... Make a poker face. That's better. Crazy Sasuke, too insane, pity for Naruto. But i understand your feeling of wanting to write NaruSasu behaviours in this genre of story, author-san. This is your pace, i accept that much. Good job on your skill.
| Moonttje chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Uwaaaa,.. I dont even know what to say, I I yeah nevermind,...
| Kalfina chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
... All aboard the bus everyone, we're taking a FEELtrip.
Right when I read Sasuke was in jail I thought to myself, "shit, this is gonna be sad huh?" And as I read further I just got progressively sadder... For me, Sasuke is a favorite character when he and Naruto are involved mutually, but otherwise, I hate his guts. (So I either adore him, or hate him) and I wanted to hate him so badly in this fic since he was a dick (rhymes!) But after I read the ending, I oddly enough couldn't hate him. I don't know why, but I just couldn't. :( Poor, poor Naruto... I'm assuming Sasuke dies after being executed, but still... EMOTIONS, WHY U SO ALL OVER THE PLACE? Overall, a great read, and thanks for making my mind and heart conflicted. *thumbs up*
| Axel K15 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
I was so conflicted about this story. I loved it and yet, I was disgusted by Sasuke. _
It was really good, though, I cannot ignore that. Insane!Sasuke was a really great idea on your part. At this moment, this is the only story in which I've heard read about him being insane. It was really great.
| Belle'Masque chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
LOVE IT! A unexpected ending, I surprisingly found myself loving this!
| spilltheteee chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Well, that was a little... ah, what's the word... graphic, I guess? But whatever. Nice story... I hope no kids come across this... but I've seen worse, so keep updating and posting new stories!
| Apricis chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
There are no words to describe how much I hate (Canon) Sasuke for what he did (and what he acts like- admit it, if you knew Sasuke in real life, you would think he's a HUGE dick), but tolerate him for Naruto's sake, because I love NaruSasuNaru, and Naruto. :3 (and hate SasuSaku- Sakura deserves better, trust me)
It sounds contradictory, but hey, just roll with it for a few more seconds.
Back to the story- I now love you forever after for for writing this story. *3* Canon Sasuke deserves this in my mind (Haven't read the recent chapters yet, so don't bash me), but I wish Naruto didn't die this way. ;3; It was sorta sad and depressing.
Yet still, I think this is an amazing oneshot. .3. Ends on a sad note, but that just makes it better in my eyes. :3
I'm sorry for my rant as well, but I really wanted to voice my opinion on Sasuke (the prick) before I exploded. ** I am also sorry if you find my rant offensive. ;3; You can flame me all you want now. :3
| Lightingmist95 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Dear god wtf was that 0_o this was too insane omg sasuke what hell did you do ? You killed Naruto fuck. I think I lost my mind because I did like this.
| Goten Trunks5 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
I'll just say ... that strong
| Rhistoria chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
This was freakin intense and insane on so many levels. It's so wrong, but I enjoyed reading this, yet I cringed at the same time. Yeah, this oneshot disgusted me but I have to admit that this was nicely written, even though I feel like 'wtf did i just read' after finishing it till the end. I wasn't expecting the effed up ending. Sasuke basically raped him to death and there's necrophillia. D: I'm not a fan of insane SasuNaru, but this was a nice oneshot anyway.