The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Remove all of the elements related to the reader such as "[Name]" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it's allowed like .

this is great!

Please continue this! Amazing story and well written, just might want someone to read over it for you for a few spelling errors. Nice work!

shit

all her ships are sitting together

this is the kind of teacher i would definitely be

can I pretend the banana is a sexual thing or am i just weird

oh god what have i done

Ahhg! Need the next chapter! Awesome writing BTW :D

oh please jinchuriki-senpai ...i mean jinchuriki...please finish this i really want to know what happened! the suspence is killing me!

I LITERALLY THREW MY PHONE

this is a really awesome fanfic. Honestly, it's my fave.

Well…sh*t! XDDDD

ill give u a penny if u update

Please update

I NEED MORE, SERIOUSLY! You should update it asap

GAHVSBDNNDBXBNDNC. HOLY JEEGUS.