|Reviews for Fifty Shades of Darkness|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Please update. I've waited for so long to read more of this incredible story.
| Richard Cypher chapter 17 . 2/17
I'm loving this story so much, please continue! I'm going through withdrawals over here. You've done a great job with how Ana would naturally react in a situation like this. Keep it up!
| ashley.mercer.16 chapter 17 . 12/31/2013
I hope that Christian at least let Ray and Carla know since they are her parents. I get Ana is angry and I wouldn't want to see their sadness and pity either but she needs those who love her most around her right now. They're her support system and she's angry at Christian just as much as she loves him and wants him to comfort her. So she's going to need other shoulders to cry on. As far as sex words are concerned honey you're talking to ppl who read the original stories so I think we're comfortable with whatever. You're the one who needs to be comfortable. Write what you're ok with and don't listen to the negative ppl. They don't like it they can stop reading! At least she's physically attracted to and sexually aroused by Christian. It means there's hope. She just needs to let go get through stage one so she can move onto the next stages. She needs a session with Flynn and more sessions to talk about it. Once she can say what Hyde did to her without having the physical reactions she'll be that many steps closer to recovery. She won't ever be the same it just doesn't work that way but she can move on. She needs to get to that anger stage because that's the stage that really moves her to the finale step. I don't think Christian or his team should do anything illegal to Hyde. They have irrefutable evidence what with the video and any physical evidence such as semen to prove Hyde raped her so he'll go away for a long time. His defense can try to claim she "wanted it " but any video evidence will clearly show her trying to fight him off and her behavior although dumb in some points ( like the shower and trashing of the clothes) does show that she was physically ill and upset over what happened which wouldn't be a reaction any woman who "wanted it" would have. Hope you update soon. You're doing great!
| ashley.mercer.16 chapter 8 . 12/30/2013
Well I should have expected that from the description of her and her rude questions! Silly me! The question I have is how did she know Ana was there?! No one but Hyde, Christian, Ana, Taylor, Gail, Luke and Grace and any nurses would know about Ana's rape. Unless in the chaos ndas were forgotten and a nurse said something to someone.
| ashley.mercer.16 chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
This detective needs to be fired! She should never have spoken to Ana in that matter no matter what she thinks! She's turning Ana into more than a victim!
| ashley.mercer.16 chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
Christian did very well reassuring her. As long as he keeps it up and doesn't get irritated when she says he doesn't want her or self deprecates he'll do fine. Also I don't know why anyone said for you to show more emotion because so far from chapter 1 I've felt all the emotions!
| ashley.mercer.16 chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
This is a tough issue for anyone. She's not going to have any choice but to tell him because he's going to see her body. The bruises the bite mark its all going to be there. First thing is they're going to have to get the security tape if there is one because she just scrubbed away and threw away all evidence of what Hyde did to her and with out irrefutable proof he raped her he'll get away with it legally. As for recovery she's going to need to talk to Flynn and Christian is going to have to constantly reassure her of his love and devotion. He's going to have to constantly tell her of her worth. You're doing a great job so far with this.
| fiat124girl chapter 17 . 12/17/2013
What a powerful chapter. He really tried to help by rallying the troops right? I think men believe when a traumatic event happens to a woman,when they are safe it's over and the rebuilding can begin. Women have so many ptsd issues to contend with. Poor Anna and poor Christian at least he got it right in the end. As to your question. Flowery words and euphemisms can distract me. Also I don't really like words a 12 year old boy would use to describe male or female body parts. That being said, I am dam lucky to read your story at all so I think you know best. Thanks for writing.
| von34 chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
Glad your back poor Ana its a long hard road ahead for them
| ena.decaceres chapter 14 . 12/15/2013
this is my review about chapter 17
OMG, bravo, enhorabuena, excellent, magnify, awesome... This chapter was worth the wait, I'm so glad you are continuing this story. Is a great story.
It's a good sign that Ana get turned on about him but so sad they didn't make love.
Please continue soon. ;-)
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/14/2013
that so wrong of her to do that to him
| Hspirito chapter 8 . 12/13/2013
i really hope you continue with this story because it's great
| bibblebunny chapter 17 . 12/11/2013
Pease continue this story it is so good. I love all the emotion and passion.
| Hspirito chapter 17 . 12/9/2013
this is a great story and i hope u update soon
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/3/2013
Hello, will you update soon? I can't wait for more chapters!