Reviews for The First: Martian Edition
guest chapter 2 . 6/27
Please, PLEASE continue this. It's great on ALL levels. The culture clash, the perspective, the characterizations, EVERYTHIG.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
Please come back! I'm sure I speak for everyone...we miss your updates and your creativity!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27/2016
OMG THAT GREAT & Love it (Falling over at the throught of all three of them and charlene in bed) Nose bleeding
Damona84 chapter 2 . 4/26/2015
Omg! This was soooo cute! I wish you continue.
nannulainen chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Oh please, give us some upgrade! I love so youre writings and I'm eager to read more!
Fulgrim chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
The pattern-of-three of the guys' explanation about how they deal with their... frustration... is /perfectly/ handled. :)

And the serious side of things - lacking the informational infrastructure to properly train new medical personnel - is extremely well-reasoned and insightful: nice one! :)

...please, please update? Pretty please with little icing figures of the Biker Mice and sugar and sprinkles on top?
Yankee71 chapter 2 . 9/6/2014
I love it it's funny and are you gonna write more?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2014
Bahaha... Please finish this. It'd just getting good :)
LSophieH chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
We make stuff blow up. A lot. In very creative ways. Bloody LOVE IT!
Serendipity's tears chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
By the gods I wish you'd continue this! The laughter it brings is amazing! Not to mention how fun the imagery is. XD
Fulgrim chapter 2 . 3/21/2014
Oh, this is gloriously, wonderfully, marvellously, absolutely PRICELESS! Good grief, you just gave the Monty Python team a run for their money with this chapter alone! :D

Thank you so much for posting this, and please keep updating. :)
Zuzanny chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Silverkitsune26 chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
I think I fell off my seat laughing when I read this. Thank you so much for making my day or year (havn't desided yet witch one).
I love "The First" but I think this one will tie these two storis as some of my favorite stores.

Please update soon.

Yours sensearly Silverkitsune26 _
nitroglycerine chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
baby-kitsune9 chapter 2 . 1/26/2014
nice answer. it sounds like the guys took a lot of frustration out on limburger and karbukle
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