Reviews for Slim Jim and the Lotto Girl
Djejdjdjendkd chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
OK, so I had a pet bunny named Ginger Marie. Her personality was similar to your Belle from the roller derby. Yeah, she was a pistol. She would have hated the term "plot bunny." She would have said it was racist...well, speciest to be exact. She would have preferred "plot rabbit."
Shelljayz chapter 12 . 10/30/2016
Please tell me tie going to update at assume point, soon! Love awkward Edward!
petmom1213 chapter 12 . 6/26/2016
Are you going to complete this? You should.
LolaTheSa chapter 12 . 4/4/2016
What a catch you are giving this Edward.. I just hope she isn't some slut that fucked the whole town.
LolaTheSa chapter 11 . 4/4/2016
I just can't like this. This Bella has a new toy and wants to play with it. Disgusting, this is how it's coming off right now, everything she does toward is damned sexual.
LolaTheSa chapter 9 . 4/4/2016
As I'm tried to stay light heartened about this, but Bella just comes off as playing with a new toy right now.
PunkBettie chapter 12 . 10/17/2015
So you end it right there?
Riam chapter 12 . 10/10/2015
Nice story, very bubbly. Edward is hilarious.
brebre99 chapter 12 . 9/9/2015
stephi910 chapter 12 . 6/26/2015
just found this story, and loving it! hope u update it soon :)
Caroleg chapter 12 . 6/1/2015
Awe poor Edward or should I say slim! Looks like bella is going to make him better tho
irelandk chapter 12 . 5/31/2015
pgrabinEdward chapter 12 . 5/22/2015
Awww! Darn the cliff-hanger! Please keep writing- this is so fun! I like how it jumps around; I didn't see any errors- great job!
pgrabinEdward chapter 11 . 5/22/2015
Ha! "Was she part wizard" and Edward's lack of a verbal filter are great!
pgrabinEdward chapter 10 . 5/22/2015
Nice to see Edward be the clutz but I like how you kept some of the doctor in Carlise. Very cute scene.
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