Reviews for Slim Jim and the Lotto Girl
stephi910 chapter 12 . 6/26
just found this story, and loving it! hope u update it soon :)
Caroleg chapter 12 . 6/1
Awe poor Edward or should I say slim! Looks like bella is going to make him better tho
irelandk chapter 12 . 5/31
;-)
pgrabinEdward chapter 12 . 5/22
Awww! Darn the cliff-hanger! Please keep writing- this is so fun! I like how it jumps around; I didn't see any errors- great job!
pgrabinEdward chapter 11 . 5/22
Ha! "Was she part wizard" and Edward's lack of a verbal filter are great!
pgrabinEdward chapter 10 . 5/22
Nice to see Edward be the clutz but I like how you kept some of the doctor in Carlise. Very cute scene.
pgrabinEdward chapter 9 . 5/22
Ha- now Edward has black and blue balls!
pgrabinEdward chapter 8 . 5/22
Ha! Another first for me- never thought of Edward bowling!
pgrabinEdward chapter 7 . 5/22
Yum- cheese fries- very cute scene!
pgrabinEdward chapter 6 . 5/22
Wow- glad your personal life is going so well, too- congratulations! Edward grabbing Bella's boobs in this story is a perfect opposite to the cannon- great job!
pgrabinEdward chapter 5 . 5/22
So great that Esme goes to church with a stoned Carlise- too funny! And the car with broken seatbelts!
pgrabinEdward chapter 4 . 5/21
This is the best Carlisle I've ever read- I can't imagine what he'll do next!
pgrabinEdward chapter 3 . 5/21
Now I must read your other work- just great! "Wow, I didn't know they sold balls over there. You go, Weirdward"
pgrabinEdward chapter 2 . 5/21
This is too funny- I will never look at Lays and Funyuns the same way again! The social akwardness is perfectly described!
pgrabinEdward chapter 1 . 5/20
So tragic, witty and funny at the same time- great balance! Can't wait to keep reading!
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