|Reviews for Fight Me, Bite Me|
| Listening to trees chapter 8 . 3/13
I'm back! :D Not sure how long I can stay, so will review this chapter first.
Gotta say, I really enjoy this short break in between to focus on their feelings. I know you've said before that this is gonna be smex-heavy (and I totally got the message, lol), but the relationship developments do present quite a nice balance with the smex.
One thing I noted was that the progression in here is quite dense. Still, it's this passionate duo we're talking about, so the pace suits them. Kudos for showing how precarious their situation still is with their trust issues; really increases the emotional impact. And ending with them becoming all the better for it -perfect! ;D
My only qualm was Cana's characterisation. Maybe it's because my strongest memories of her was the Fairy Glitter thing on Tenrou Island, but she seems a bit too harsh in here. Then again, maybe being drunk and publicly rejected does that to a person? Dunno, I'm not the most loyal follower of the manga. :I
Anyway, good job as always! :) (And please ignore my comment if you can't use it; I just realised you're already on Chap 16 *orz)
| yaoilover505 chapter 16 . 3/12
You can totally expect Erza, Mira, Cana and Lucy to discuss about who's the top.. Awesome chappie! and update Faster than jet.
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/11
I LOVE how you keep them in character and how well put together your thoughts are! PLEASE don't stop writing! _
| gratsulover chapter 16 . 3/11
i love your fics
but this one is like volume 30 when gray says to juvia that paddles arent his style
| nazurath92 chapter 5 . 3/11
This is so amazing but I want to know just like Gray what happened to Natsu cuz this story is getting better and better :)
| JonASt11 chapter 16 . 3/10
Loved your latest chapter :D Keep up the excellent work! Eagerly awaiting the next update :3
| nazurath92 chapter 1 . 3/10
Now that sounds like a thrill i'm happy for them :)
| blackagenda chapter 16 . 3/9
For a second I thought you were about to end the story glad Grey was just dreaming
| stormbringer9001 chapter 16 . 3/9
Oh gosh! I wonder what their reactions will be when they find out about natsu and gray!
| SoRikuR0x chapter 16 . 3/9
That was an awesome chapter! :) mmmmm poor gray! :( I thought it was real at first and then Natsu and then I'm like... THAT DID NOT JUST HAPPEN. NO.
See you in the next chapter can't wait to see what happens next!
| Haymorea chapter 1 . 3/9
This story is sexy as hell! omg, you have no idea! Nekoyasha12 is a best friend of mine and she told me to check your story out! I love it!
| Endlessdevotion chapter 16 . 3/9
At the beginning of this chapter I thought: "But wait a minute, if everything's okay that means the story would be over, but it's not her style to end it the easy way like that. What's going on here?"
But then Natsu got shot and it was pretty clear, haha. I almost forgot how kinky they were since there wasn't any bdsm in the last few chapters but I remembered when the paddle thing was brought up. God, I love your writing.
| Strangeworld chapter 16 . 3/9
Nooooo why is there no more chapters to read yet ;-;
In all seriousness, this is amazing - and an example of why I love fanfiction over straight up erotica. You manage to actually have a good love story behind the characters... and some damn hot BDSM of course. Seriously, I love this, and I hope to see more, soon.
| demonsoul890 chapter 14 . 3/8
gooooood that was marvelous, and awesome I always fall in love with your chapters and your kinkies too
| DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 16 . 3/8
Awww I love how Natsu thought nobody imagined him and Gray as a couple but in reality, the ones who do are the ones closest to them and that's so sweet