Reviews for Breathing Through Stone
Suricatessen chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Ah, Adamaï. Despite being Yugo's brother and only real family, he never gets much of the spotlight, like you underlined in your notes. A look at the official website even shows him as one of the "allied side characters", not "heroes". But seeing what he went through, like the huge responsibility that fell upon him just as he had to deal with his mentor's sudden death, there's a lot of room for character development that you use very well. Any attempt to bring more depth to the most underused character of the series deserves credit; even more so when it's done in such a touching way. Enjoyable read, thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
1) your writing of ad and pinpin is spot on, and you've even got a good sense of the show's antics shining through even when there's serious introspecting going on! that is super impressive!
2) it's Qilby. qil-by, pronounced "kill," "be." as in what he did to king yugo. that neumonic always helps me keep it straight.