Reviews for Beg
kiddy.t.wolf chapter 16 . 5/17
Oh great now look at what you did- there's blood all over my shirt and its your fault!...well...mine...but its your fault for writing such an ending! Got my nose bleeding n crap...ill be back fo another story...just have to stop the bleeding first-/-;;
Amanda chapter 16 . 2/9
This was a great ending
Oneechan94 chapter 16 . 1/15
This is one of the best and most creative fanfics I have ever read of One Piece and ZoSan-pairing! :D I liked to read how Sanji struggles with the pain, ah the pain is so lovely but some blood will make it perfect! Thank you for writing this fanfic, I got hooked up to it, it saved my day but only spoiled it because I couldn't stop in the middle and I stayed up late to read it to the end...but still, thanks! :3
Michikuni Mayu chapter 16 . 12/9/2014
Hey im the one who was searching this story on tumblr. This is the 2nd time that I read it and I'm really pleased. I really like this story with everything in , humour,love,sex,attacks,violence,suspens Everything. I love Zoro's possessiveness over Sanji its so cute X).
Congrat for this story I hope that you will make other complete like this one :D
nekonesan chapter 16 . 8/7/2014
Woah! This story was freaking awesome! I can't even, really nice idea and very nice wa to bring it together I don't really have any suggestions, it was a very nicely stringed story n.n
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 16 . 6/3/2014
It's finished! Yay! I have officially caught up.., with EVERYTHING! Yes I know I haven't reviewed containment breach yet but that's because my internet was out for 2 weeks and data on my phone is so useless when loading vids, I wanted to listen to the song first before reviewing so it wil have to wait til tomorrow..,

this was amazing and very well written, I think because I've been hopping between newer and older works I haven't seen a difference in your writing but this was done amazingly so no worries on that end.., very satisfied with everything.., NOT confused, thank fuck.., but one little thing.., the drunken dare..,

What. The fuck. Happened?

I wanna know.., you mentioned it in a few chapters and I'm really curious.., I bet it was hilarious, being Luffy and all, horribly awkward, because they're dorks, and freaking adorable because hey, they're dorks..,

I still can't believe you made them have sex in the infirmary.., Chopper has to clean that room.., he can smell everything! He's just a lad damnit! Anyways I loved it and yeah, my spamming your inbox will now be reduced to one every update.., you must be so tired of me
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 14 . 6/3/2014
That bitch.., is it bad that I keep reading Andrea? It kinda happens to be my older sister's name.., and she's kinda a bitch.., you wouldn't think so if you met her.., she's only like that to me.., yeah thats bad.., stop reading it wrong *slaps self* her daughters are amazingly wonderful though..,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 13 . 6/3/2014
God damn reversed sedated Zoro is adorable.., I love that.,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 11 . 6/3/2014
But Zoro HAS lifted weights in the kitchen before.., quiet a few times.., if I remember correctly he kept his smaller dumbells in the galley on the Merry before.., so go ahead Sanji.., smoke all you want.., leave a pack or 7 up there.., haha.., hell, hide a pack under the infirmary bed while you're at it.., don't worry, you'll be fine.., no consequences..,

or do yoga.., whatever..,

hmmm.., yoga is kinda like meditation in a way sorta.., just with more movement..,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
I'm going to take a moment from my reading and write a theory before I either forget or get disproven by the rest of the chapter..,

When the Fox introduced itself as a Guardian Angel I thought "well hey, maybe this Sud'dha character is like Asura in a sense for Sanji.., maybe these mental spirits are gonna go head to head til one or both humans perish..," which got me imagining a giant fire fox looming behind Sanji in the heat of battle, kinda like Koma and Aoi in Beelzebub.., then I thought, "oh shit! God gave us food, the Devil gave us spices.., food gives strength and spices give flavor and heat.., strength and heat.., oh shit Sud'dha gave Sanji is Diable Jambe fire powers! *throws hands up in awesomeness* I figured it all out! I'm awesome..," The End.

So I was right about flaming kicks and Angels.., and then Zoro kills Sanji.., not how I was expecting this to end.., will shit.., I guess someone did perish..,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
And there it is.., yay for Sogeking! He truly is a hero.., they might lose a swordsman now but they will gain another at thriller bark.., along with a new katana.., hey if Zoro's so keen on calling it a katana and not a sword, shouldn't he be called a katanaman? You know.., 'cause stuff..,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 7 . 6/2/2014
So is Zoro a chipmunk or a bird?

*Someone in the background whispers* neither, he's a plant
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 6 . 6/2/2014
What a buzz kill.., damn you Zoro.., but you know, there are plenty of medication salves and ointments you can use as lube.., hell I think there's actual lube in the infirmary.., damn you Marimo you did that on surpose..,

I was expecting Asura to come out.., maybe in 7 yeah?
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 5 . 6/2/2014
I thought there was a bathroom in the crows nest.., maybe only in my mind.., hey, couldn't Robin just use her arms to bring food up to him, she can unlock the windows (AND THE FUCKING HATCH) and hand him a plate or two..,

*mm clears her throat* THAT'S NOT PART OF THE STORY!
*bdm flinches* shit.., sorry.., calm yo panties..,
BrainDeadMaggot chapter 4 . 6/2/2014
Uh excuse me? Did Robin just say 'storm out'? Oh no she di'n't! *snap*snap*

Hey.., Usopp is not a fucking broken clock.., don't be a dick, Sanji..,

That last part killed me.., *Sanji kneeling below the hatch, tapping softly on the wood* "Zoro" he whines as he continues tapping "Zoro.., let me in.., I'm exhausted.., eh heh ehhh" *sobs pathetically* " Zoro let me in I wanna cuddle.., Zoro" *taptaptap* "Zoro it's cold out here ehhhhh.., god damn shitty asshole marimo..," he mumbles before calling out louder "ZOROOO open up" nows THAT'S ooc.., pathetic..,
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