|Reviews for The Element of Surprise|
| Kyle chapter 19 . 1/25/2020
The 'surprise' to this fic is your brains exploding or perhaps any sanity you have left.
| Kyle chapter 17 . 1/25/2020
If we had a high altitude EMP go off taking out our grid or any kind of grid down event long term your OC would be the first to die or be shot either by bad guys or good guys defending themselves rightfully.
| Kyle chapter 13 . 1/25/2020
I skipped ahead and do NOT see any 'plot twists' as you put them.
| Kyle chapter 5 . 1/25/2020
This is why our country is broken. Those kinds of mindsets like your OC expects things to 'magically' work with radical ideas and never thinks things through. Logic and planning is NOT allowed!
In real life you gotta have something from something. If you rob Peter to pay Paul then Peter is going to hurt which means less in the economy which means less money in the government. More taxes doesn't fix wasteful spending.
| Kyle chapter 4 . 1/25/2020
So what happeneda bout her trying to escape? You kinda glossed over it. This story seems more of a ramble then a fic. It's like Star Trek during the writers strike during the middle of the TNG series. The 'quality' of the episodes showed. I don't know about the later seasons of TNG but the first couple had a severe writer's strike going on.
| Kyle chapter 3 . 1/25/2020
"I had a LOT to learn" Earth is a spiritual classroom. People have chosen to be stupid instead so we will continue to have lessons taught to us. Obama and the Clintons sold the USA up a river thru a lot of back door deals that are literally illegal. The Clintons did the Russian Conclusion they got campaign money selling our military secrets and people who testify against them all died 'mysteriously'.
The Epsting thing was just the latest and probably more to come. Yeah put him in the only cell without a working camera and he killed himself when there was no way in the configuration of the cell to do so...riiiiiiiiiiight.
Everyone has visited the island where they sell young children for sex. Trump visited only once though and said he would never go back. Bush has visited many times and Obama practically lived it.
He ran on shutting down the Iraq war but escalated it and put random troops in other nations including Australia. He has over 2,000 air drone strikes on his hands all without declaring.
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
| sunlightRiM13 chapter 11 . 1/16/2017
You wrote except instead of accept when Emily was apologizing for breaking the old guy's hand. I like your story, it make me laugh, and is a good procrastination tool from things that have me stressing so thanks.
| Kira440 chapter 43 . 6/22/2016
This story is great! I keep laughing as I read it and I love it! I hope you update, I would love to see how this ends!
| Guesswho chapter 43 . 6/13/2016
Please, for the love of all things sacred and holy, update! It's been 7 years!
| Guesswho chapter 39 . 6/13/2016
Please let her be alright!
| Guesswho chapter 37 . 6/13/2016
Wow. You have me tearing up. I've been reading this for a couple of days and I am very much enjoying it.
| Diving in chapter 2 . 3/6/2016
I like it so far. Go Emily! ! ! Kick them all! ! !
| lizziecats chapter 43 . 7/9/2014
I love this story, its funny, interesting and very captivating lol
I find myself addicted to this story so much so that I truly can't wait for the next update!
I think Emily is an amazing character, she's able to lighten the mood even in the most dire situations. She cares more for her friends well being over her own safety, proving so when Sauron was controlling her she was willing to stab and kill herself in order to defy Sauron and protect her friends. She even went so far as to separate herself from them as a means to prevent Sauron from being able to use her to find out their plans.
I'm curious as to what will happen to Emily, since she could be controlled by Sauron at any point in time. Will she be able to stop Sauron from using her or will she be killed by him for disobeying his orders. I'm also curious as to what will happen to Emily once the war is over. Will Emily return home or will she choose to remain in middle earth now that she has made such strong bonds and friendships with the remaining members of the fellowship and many other in this land. This is just my opinion but if I was in she position I couldn't see myself returning to my own world after witnessing all that has happened to her so far.
Anyway like I said in the beginning I love this story and I am obviously looking forward to the next update lol I just want you to know that I really appreciate all the hard work and dedication you've put into creating this story. I know it's not easy to write something like this and that it takes time. I just want you to know that I appreciate or rather love all that you've done to make this story as amazing and enjoyable as it has been for me so far lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TO INCREDIBLE TO BE LEFT UNFINISHED, I SIMPLY MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND SO ON UNTIL THE VERY LAST CHAPTER!
IT TRULY WOULD BE TO SAD TO SEE THIS STORY LEFT UNFINISHED WHEN I AM SO ADDICTED TO IT AND WISH TO READ MORE LOL
SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WOULD BE SO DISAPPOINTED IF THIS STORY WERE NOT TO CONTINUE TILL THE END! :(
| blue candlelight 13 chapter 42 . 5/26/2014