Reviews for Weapon
Crisp Berry chapter 26 . 8/7/2015
Although the grammar is a little shaky and at times there were a few things I was confused about or thought weird, the plot was interesting. I admit that at the first two chapters I was thinking of dropping it but every time I would stop myself because I was curious to know what was going to happen next. It may not be my number one favorite story but I definitely enjoyed it. Sometimes perfect grammar doesn't make the perfect story. I know that I've dropped a few stories with very good writing in it just because the story was dull. Thank you for the lovely read! :)
Guest chapter 26 . 7/26/2015
At the end I was kind of hoping you would bring Kin and Gin after Sasuke proposed to Hinata and just laugh and fist pump each other or something like that to let Hinat know that uncle Kin and uncle Gin was watching over her the whole time. But I loved it

I also cried when you killer Ginkaku and Kinkaku
anne chapter 26 . 6/25/2015
hello there! i really like this story.

thank you for the read.

side note: the ten tails story is my absolute fav!
Lightning-darui chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
kinkaku and ginkaku didn't have to die
Sabie0521 chapter 26 . 12/2/2013
This has got to be my favorite fanfiction story that I've read!
chibi dog chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
Ohh I love love love love this story. I cried so much when Kinkaku and Ginkaku died or when temari told her to leave the sand village :( that was sad. But still This story is great! _ I love It! Muah
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kiuibi123 chapter 26 . 12/1/2013
i personally would much enjoy an epilouge, with a lemon, and a good look at possible sasuhina family life.
Cascade00 chapter 26 . 11/27/2013
I've been a couple of chapters behind and now I've finally caught only to have it completed! Thank you for finishing through.
Firegoat chapter 26 . 11/24/2013
TT-TT

I always get emotional at the end of stories.

Thanks again white for taking is through another adventure with hinata. This is another gem to add to my "to read when free" collection :p. I'm always impressed by the scope of your imagination

Can't wait for your next story. :)
sulli8989 chapter 26 . 11/24/2013
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

I like that sasuhina moment! kawaii de! :))

but what will happen now? hinata finally knows her history and sad that she can't recall her past with her mother and father. I'm sure she knows that she is very much loved by them right? I'd like to see sasuhina having a family together! and finally that vicious circle that she grew up in has ended! but I think how danzo died was a little rushed tho.

can you have a little epilogue for sasuhinas marriage? typing this reminds me of bella and Edwards wedding! :))
chibi beary chapter 26 . 11/24/2013
tats it? no wedding? I feel bad for gaara tho!
Booom BaBy chapter 26 . 11/25/2013
I was here Seens the beggining and now i waited till the end. I'll wait till the next story
sweetgirl929 chapter 26 . 11/23/2013
Aww...such a great ending for this story. I can't believe it's over now :(
sweetgirl929 chapter 25 . 11/23/2013
Oh my just read this chapter, and it was so good! I can't wait for how it all turns out.
Mariah chapter 24 . 11/20/2013
That was awesome i cant wait to read more! You need to tweak with your grammar. Read over your prompts there may be extra words into your story or not enough letters to make a proper word. Im sorry if i sound harsh-ish but look for those. :) i absolutely love this! :D you are awesome! Keep it up.
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