Reviews for To be a Consort
KrixLight chapter 13 . 3/19/2017
the story is not bad, but there's a couple of errors throughout and areas where you probably didn't re-read before uploading. I think it would have been better if beta-ed. quality of writing can be improved, but the plot, idea, and story is gold. great job for a first fic.
KrixLight chapter 2 . 3/19/2017
I thought it was an accident on the summary, but you mean Fenrir Greyback right (spelled with 2 "r" rather than 2 "f"). Typo?
Guest chapter 13 . 6/8/2016
Its like bitter choclate
Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 13 . 1/28/2015
Lzay-Niight chapter 7 . 12/3/2014
I wonder if something is going to give now...
Lzay-Niight chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
Harry does come off as ungrateful, while desperately trying to be the 'hero' again. I really don't care for his part in this story...I am glad the next chapter will be about Draco. Maybe it will shed more light on his situation.
Lzay-Niight chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
So basically, Harry, Draco, and Neville were likely forced to be in a relationship with older men who later abuse them as they please. At some point, all three 'cares' for their abuser and now wish to make it a more 'loving' relationship.


Right, well, I am curious enough to see if this will be true near the end or not (A few minor changes does not count in my opinion).
Gleas chapter 13 . 7/18/2014
This fic was so enjoyable and so cute!
gleefan2009 chapter 13 . 7/8/2014
Love it please write more
sweetandspice chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
Loved it so good!
helga1967 chapter 13 . 4/22/2014
Thaks for the tale.
angelallie15 chapter 12 . 2/24/2014
Awe their cute together, Harry finally has a real family :)
LittleThingsToMakeYouSmile chapter 12 . 2/23/2014
I'm about 99% sure you should write an epilogue. And that last 1% is only because I don't want to force you into writing, (cause that sucks) but it would be lovely to read an epilogue regardless! If you can write one it would be an amazing way to wrap up your very first fic. Thank you, well done, and hope you update soon.
Gaia-sama chapter 12 . 2/22/2014
So sweet...
SincerelyYourSecret chapter 12 . 2/22/2014
It's crazy how much I lie this story. You shoul write an epilogue like maybe when the pups are jut coming into their teens and maybe Darius is awkwardly attracted to Draco and Voldemort's son and is super protective of him (being a warewolf and all) and yea I think that would be super cute.
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