Reviews for Capital Gains
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
Holy crap. I love his dirty mouth. So amazing
kneon chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
This was a fun story.
Col. Rage-Shadow Dragon Leader chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
I liked it. The virgin, the womanizer, all good :)
mrsvixter chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
really great
very hot i do love a dominating Edward with a really filthy mouth ...
Lafemmevegeta chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I worked at a bank, so I can imagine my husband in this fic.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Naughtyyy. Thanks for entering our contest.

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pnkats chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Omg I loved it. Wold love for it to be a story!
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Oh man, that is some boss! Made me lol ! Hot o/s!
evilnat chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
He was definitely a dirty talker!

I liked it!
NKubie chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Good job! Solid writing and kudos to your beta! It would have been nice to see more of an evolution with Edward, but with a o/s, there's only so much you can do.

You certainly used the theme well! That was smokin' hot!

Good luck!
Jiff Simpson chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Good luck!
sandalyn05 chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
That was very interesting. I would love to read more of this story. It was great. I could see problems ahead for Edward and Bella. I hope you continue it.
pengirl25 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Aww...sweet after all that crass, vulgar and delicious mouth ;) I was half expecting for Charlie to come back unexpectedly to see hat Edwards reaction would be to have taken the police chief's daughter in his own home *smirk*
Wendyg63 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Love hot, demanding Edward. Great fic
holly buterbaugh chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
love it!
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