|Reviews for Astronomy Tower Trouble|
| Anna chapter 32 . 7/24
I already told you how I liked this story, but I left out just one detail that I actually criticized while reading the chapters. It was a bit uncomfortable how Cormac coaxed Hermione to indulge in sex. It is nice to see how she was tempted by him, attracted, and I assumed this was your intention; however, there are better methods to demonstrate that than letting a guy be forceful with a girl. I saw how things progressed as they both got more intimate and I understood the process, of course. Still, it would have been good if Cormac had respected Hermione's slow pace and actually talked to her.
I wanted to explain well this idea, even though it is simple.
| Anna chapter 44 . 7/24
This story was so sweet and interesting at the same time that it became probably one of my favorites. Well, you said it would be good to have a real, walking Cormac around this world. Definitely there are lots of book-Cormacs out there, but not many like yours, unfortunately. I loved how they captivated each other and built not only a loving relationship, but also a friendly one. The story was beautiful and I liked the title. It certainly does not lack humour, just like the rest of your creative work.
As a side note, I am truly hoping to find a sequel among your listed stories.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/21
I would like a sequel please because it story so beautifully written.
| Guest chapter 44 . 7/5
I loved this story alot there just are not enough Hermione and Cormac stories out there and you are a really great author you should defiantly write a sequel or at least an epilogue
| Zipanu chapter 44 . 5/17
I apologize for not reviewing on every chapter as I read through but I don't leave many reviews. I mostly wont start a fix unless its finished because I hate waiting for weekly updates. I both love and hate that you left the letter a mystery. Did you ever write an epilogue? I really hope so, one where they meet up after the battle and reconnect. Just a quaint little happily ever after. I do so love happy endings and this was not a happy ending. I got kinda emotional over it. I may have to check your other stories out. I'm normally a Dramoine fan but I stumbled on a Cormac x Hermione story a few weeks ago that I really loved and made a point to check out other fics in this pairing. I enjoy your Cormac over all, I think I like him better in the beginning though. By the end he seems a little overly charming and I feel he's scary perfect but I still like him quite a lot. You had a very nice flow to your story and I really liked that there were two parts of a great story tucked away under such an unassuming title. Anyways if there is not yet an epilogue I hope that it one day swims to the forefront of your mind and demands to be written! Thank you for all your time and effort spent on putting this story out in the virtual world to be enjoyed -Zi
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/14
I hate the fact that Cormac has to practically 'coax' Hermione into sex like that seems so wrong. You're treading on a fine line between consented and dub-con or even non-con. Makes me cringe when I read it because you make it seem so normal to be coaxed by a guy to have sex.
| harmonious chapter 44 . 4/16
Oh I am actually crying because this is actually better than Ron and Hermione. And this is just so unfair. I want them together now and I want her to run into Cormac's arms in the final battle and call him an asshole because he never said goodbye. And I want her cousins to ask her where he is at. And you cannot do this to people! Just very well written and you did amazing at keeping everyone in character
| HungarianBebe chapter 44 . 2/5
loved this story so much. pls continue this story, I would love to see them get together after the final battle.
| SlytherinsGoldenGirl chapter 44 . 10/7/2016
I stumbled across this story, and honestly it is an amazing fic. I hope you add an epilogue or sequel. I'd love to see what happens with them reuniting. new favorite!
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/14/2016
I qas hoping this chapter would end with Hermione in tears so that Cormac would feel bad but okay
| Guest chapter 43 . 2/29/2016
| Guest chapter 44 . 2/29/2016
| tadah2 chapter 13 . 12/13/2015
This chapter is in present tense. It's hard to read.
| tadah2 chapter 12 . 12/13/2015
This chapter and the ones before it are in past tense.