Reviews for The Choice
murphycat chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
This would have been a much better ending!
Susan M. M chapter 2 . 10/24/2013
Much more believable than Chakotay with Barbie of Borg. I liked the allusion to The Questor Files.
skadoo chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it, especially the different take on whether KJ would indeed leave starfleet.
Jessie Alysee chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
A very charming, delightful story! And, I agree with someone who reviewed it, there should be a sequel! Again, this is an outstanding story!
AnnieColton chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
Very well written! Enjoyed it! You should be very proud of this story!
Kristie Goldberg chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
What a great story! Are you going to continue it? It does beg for a sequel! I wish I could write like that! Amazing! This is definately a stoy that I will keep marked.

Thank you sooooo much for making my morning a pleasant one! Nothing like relaxing with a good story and a nice Starbuck's Latte!
Kathryn Williams chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
A very good story, well thought out. I do agree with Dr. Margaret about your sentences! Otherwise, very interesting!
xxx chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Very nice job on bringing everything together :-) Thank you for sharing!
Margaret Billings chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Jamelia,

I liked the way you wove your story. It tied up a lot of loose ends. I'm not fond of some of your sentence structure. I don't like an abundance of short, choppy sentences. Those you've managed to avoid. On the same token, long sentences (the kind you often use) can lose a reader. Even your opening sentence is way too long.

As you finish a paragraph, re-read it through before writing the next. You know in your head what your writing and where it's going. However, the reader doesn't know. They need to be able to follow the story. It's more difficult to follow when the sentences are so long.

Again, it's an wonderful story overall. You should be proud of it.
Mrs. Singing Violin chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Aww, I love how you wrapped up so many storylines! You even solved the "Borg baby" mystery and threw in a couple of bones for TOS and TNG fans! And of course, Seven (and therefore C7) was nowhere to be seen. Nicely done!